1. September 1-2, 2016 Find the ten mistakes in the paragraph at the top
Answer the multiple choice questions

2. Where are the mistakes?
(1) Have you read a book by Lemony Snicket! (2) Lemony Snicket is not a real persons name. (3) Its and imaginary name used by the author of the A Series of Unfortunate Events books. (4) In those books, which were first published in Septemer of 1999, readers follow Violet Klaus, and Sunny as they attempt to protect their fortune from greedy count olaf. (5) The identity of Lemony is secret. (6) but he communicates thru his representative, Daniel Handler.

3. Multiple Choice 1. What change should be made to sentence 2?
add a comma after Snicket
put a semicolon before real
change Lemony to lemony
add an apostrophe to persons
2. What change(s) should be made to sentence 3?
add a comma after name
break it into two sentences with a period
its to it’s and and to an
change imaginary to imagery
3. What change should be made in sentence 4?
change Septemer to September
remove the comma after books
remove the comma after 1999
add a comma after Sunny
4. How can you revise sentence 5?
Although the identity of Lemony is a secret, he communicates through his representative, Daniel Handler.
However, the identity of Lemony is secret, he communicates through his representative, Daniel Handler.
In addition, the identity of Lemony is a secret, he communicates through his representative, Daniel Handler.
Therefore, the identity of Lemony is secret, but he communicates through his representative, Daniel Handler.

4. SSR Rubric

5. Today’s Objectives Content Objective
Today I will review one of our new vocabulary words by writing the definition, at least two synonyms, drawing a picture and creating a sentence using my classmate’s presentations
Today I will work with a group to develop a description of Malala using evidence from the text I am Malala and my notes
Language Objective
I will be discussing the novel and its main character, Malala, using acquired vocabulary, with my classmates as well as re-reading the text when necessary, and writing my ideas down to form a coherent character portrait

6. Today’s Questions Who is Malala? How can I relate to her?
What character traits does she possess?
What proof do you have of her character?
Do we judge others without proof? Should we?

7. ADVANTAGEOUS

9. PARTNERS ONE PERSON LOOKS FOR THE PHYSICAL TRAITS OF MALALA
ONE PERSON LOOKS FOR THE MENTAL TRAITS OF MALALA

10. Malala character portrait
14 points
10 points
8 points
4+ physical trait words
3 physical trait words
1-2 physical trait words
4+ mental trait words
3 mental trait words
1-2 mental trait words
2 quotes from the novel describing Malala physically
1 quote from the novel describing Malala physically
quote(s) are weakly linked to physical trait(s)
2 quotes from the novel describing Malala mentally
1 quote from the novel describing Malala mentally
quote(s) are weakly linked to mental trait(s)
Correct Spelling
1-2 spelling errors
3-4 spelling errors
Colorful and Creative
Colorful but plain
Lacking color
Both quotes are correctly cited using page numbers
Only one quote is correctly cited using a page number
Quotes are lacking page numbers

11. CITING QUOTATIONS