1. Narrative Writing #12

2. Romance Brainstorming Help No accident we met How did you find me?
Licks my face
Help
accident
animal
child
alone
lost
life
Romance
gift
Looking after the dog together
I turned right not left
Brings two people together
going forward
Learns to love
we’ve only got 10 seconds
hug
lost love
Never alone
time disappeared
Good time to think
lost number

3. You try Do your ideas change if you think of romance?
Happiness
Romance

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5. Romance Brainstorming Help No accident we met How did you find me?
Licks my face
Help
accident
animal
child
alone
lost
life
Romance
gift
Looking after the dog together
I turned right not left
Brings two people together
going forward
Learns to love
we’ve only got 10 seconds
hug
lost love
Never alone
time disappeared
Good time to think
lost number

6. You try Do your ideas change if you think of romance?
Happiness
Romance

7. This lesson has helped you to ….
1. Think quickly
2.Think in way that you are not used to

8. restate
Staring at my reflection in the plane window, trying not to think of the past, I ponder the person waiting for me.
Looking at one’s self and thinking, the mind screams to look at the past rather than the future.

9. Restate the sentence in other way
Describe an outstanding feature of the subject Or something unique about the subject
Restate the sentence in other way
Add more information about what you want to tell the reader
Explain what the character is thinking
Explain more about what the character is doing
Provide more detail on the setting Strunk, W (Revised 2011). The Elements of Style. USA: The Elements of Style Press.

10. 請描述關於主題的特色或其獨特之處。 請用別種方式重述句子 。 告訴讀者你想傳達的訊息是甚麼。 請說明主角人物的想法。
請說明主角人物要做些甚麼。
請提供多一些有關故事背景設定的細節。 Strunk, W (Revised 2011). The Elements of Style. USA: The Elements of Style Press.

11. Restate the sentence in another way
You Try - 1
Restate the sentence in another way
The unknown soldier following me has done something unexpected, breaking his pattern, getting closer to his quarry, me.
Restate

12. Restate the sentence in another way
You Try - 2
Restate the sentence in another way
“Why are you doing this?”
Restate

13. Restate the sentence in another way
You Try - 3
Restate the sentence in another way
Putting aside our past differences, I stared at my friend sitting opposite me.
Restate

14. Restate the sentence in another way
You Try - 4
Restate the sentence in another way
Physically drained, I can see the end, however my journey is only just beginning.
Restate

15. Restate the sentence in another way
You Try - 5
Restate the sentence in another way
A strong wind pushes against my body, but I keep climbing, knowing my training will ensure victory.
Restate

16. 1.Now thinking more quickly
2. The follow on sentence _restating another way