1. IEEE 802 EC Privacy Recommendation SG Comments on Privacy PAR/CSD
July, 2015
Juan Carlos Zuniga, InterDigital Labs
(EC SG Chair)

2. Comments from 802.3
Technical and Economic Feasibility do not have a great deal of information. Technical feasibility seems to be based on reports that may be published. No evidence is provided to support feasibility. Economic feasibility seems to be a promise to consider cost.
The superfluous PAR field information at the beginning of the CSD document is inappropriate and should be deleted.

3. Comments from
5.4 – Delete the Purpose statement. The current statement does not add to what is in the scope already.
5.4 Alternate #2: change the purpose statement to state “why” you would want to use this document. Replace 5.4 with the following:
“The purpose of this recommend practice is to promote a consistent approach by IEEE 802 protocol developers to mitigate Internet privacy threats identified in the defined privacy threat model and provide a privacy guideline.”
Alternate #2 is the preferred choice.
CSD: The CSD should be reformatted to be a stand alone document as outlined in the LMSC OM