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1 English B1A In Class Essay #1

2 Common Issues Grammar trouble Paragraph/essay structure
Lack of reference to the article Lack of understanding of the article

3 Introduction Behaving like a psychopath will make you more successful in life. You will be able to focus more on the task at hand. Not having concerns about anything else will also make you a better canidate for jobs and relationships. Psycopaths are more successful in life. Having a better job and lover will boost anyones confidence. Psycopath do a great job of dailing their attributes.

4 Body Paragraph First reason, in his article he quotes a conversation with Dutton and a dysfunctional psychopath. The psychopath says, “It’s not that we’re bad, it’s that we’ve got too much of a good thing” (4). In my opinion I agree with the quote because who are we to determine whos good or bad. In reality I believe everybody has a little bit of pscyho in them just because someone has more then others doesn’t necessarily mean they are a danger to society.

5 Conclusion My hope is to dubunk the myth that all psychopaths are dysfunctional. Behaving like a psychopath can indeed make people more successful. Using psychopathic traits correctly is the key to becoming more successful. “You want to think of those traits being like the dials on a studio mixing desk, that you can turn up and down in different situations” a quote by Theo Merz on “Why Psychopaths Are More Successful” posted 07 May 2014 (Paragraph 4).


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