1. Thesis Statements: A Review
ELAGSE8W1: Write argumentative essays using clear and relevant evidence.

2. Although surveillance cameras may be expensive,
The Concession
The first part of the statement is the concession, where you recognize the opposing side’s most important counter-argument.
It comes first because you want your audience to know that you understand where they’re coming from.
Although surveillance cameras may be expensive,

3. … schools should install them …
The Thesis
This is your argument, your position.
You must be clear and direct. No waffling.
… schools should install them …

4. The Reasons
You must follow your thesis with a brief statement of the reasons why you believe your position is right.
Keep these reasons brief. You can explain them fully in the body of the essay.
… because they increase safety, reduce vandalism, and keep both teachers and students accountable for their actions.

5. Thesis Sentence Practice
Directions:
Write a thesis sentence for each of the topics shown.
Answer the question according to how you feel about it. There’s no right answer.
Write 3 reasons why you believe it.
Write a reason why someone else would not believe it.
Combine into an effective concession - thesis - reasons pattern.