1. “Read and analyze…” Goals: Evaluate analysis of “What’s Eating”
“Read and analyze…”
Goals:
Evaluate analysis of “What’s Eating”
Begin revising analysis to turn in

2. In a few minutes, you’ll read your analysis aloud to a partner and take note of any spots that might need revision.

3. Revision Re - vision See WHAT? again see
Do you start with the text, and what it says?
Is your summary accurate?
Is it fair?

4. Revision Re - vision See WHAT? again see Organization: GRAMMAR?
Each body paragraph?
Topic sentence
Evidence
Connectors
Beginning / middle / end?
Intro / body / conclusion
Main idea & support?
Thesis & textual evidence?
GRAMMAR?
SPELLING?
FORMAT?

5. Read someone else’s paper:
Check for accuracy & clarity; offer suggestions.
Read your own paper:
Check for accuracy & clarity; make changes as needed.

7. As soon as you finish revising, submit your paper to turnitin
As soon as you finish revising, submit your paper to turnitin.com & check the originality report. If it’s red or yellow, get help for additional revision.
For next time:
Bring your paper (hard copy) & your textbook.