1. Argumentative Essay Revision Ideas

2. Introduction Includes a hook that grabs the reader’s attention
Clearly identifies the issue and states the writing situation  
States a pro and states a con – briefly mentions both sides of the argument
Clearly states a thesis statement (claim)
Read your partner’s introduction. Discuss any
questions or concerns that you may have.
Discuss “glows and grows.” What did the writer
do well? What might need improvement? Are
all parts of the introduction present and clear?
*As you read, circle any spelling, capitalization, or punctuation errors.

3. First and Second Body Paragraphs
Includes a clear topic sentence for each paragraph
Gives convincing reasons to support your position
Uses a variety of sentence structures
Uses transitional words, phrases, and clauses
Uses different kinds of support
facts
details
examples
definitions
expert opinions
direct quotations
cause-and-effect predictions
reason, logic, and good sense
Read your partner’s first two body paragraphs.
Discuss any questions or concerns that you may
have. Discuss “glows and grows.” What did the
Writer do well? What might need improvement?
Did the writer include all points listed above?
*As you read, circle any spelling, capitalization, or punctuation errors.

4. Third Body Paragraph - Counterclaim and Rebuttal
Acknowledges and refutes opposing positions
Uses different kinds of support
facts
details
examples
definitions
expert opinions
direct quotations
cause-and-effect predictions
reason, logic, and good sense
*As you read, circle any spelling, capitalization, or punctuation errors.

6. Conclusion Restates thesis statement (claim)
Explains why issue is important
Summarizes main points
Gives a call to action and/or possible outcome
Leaves reader with something important to think about
Read your partner’s conclusion. Discuss any
questions or concerns that you may have.
Discuss “glows and grows.” What did the writer
do well? What might need improvement? Are
all parts of the conclusion present and clear?
*As you read, circle any spelling, capitalization, or punctuation errors.

7. Transitional Words and Phrases
Skim through your partner’s body paragraphs. Underline any transitional words and phrases that have been used. If your partner has not used transitions, use your transitions chart and discuss which words an phrases your partner could add.
*As you read, circle any spelling, capitalization, or punctuation errors.

9. Replacing “Dead Words” – Breathe Life Back into Your Diction
Skim through your partner’s essay. Look for repetitive words or “tired, worn-out” words. Circle those words and discuss more interesting synonyms that could replace those words.
*As you read, circle any spelling, capitalization, or punctuation errors.