1. Revisions for Catcher in the rye essay
Purpose: To revise your outline in preparation to type your final essay.

2. STAR Method Substitute two words for better words.
Take-out two phrases or sentences that are dead weight (unnecessary).
Add two phrases, sentences, ideas, etc. to provide more detail or detail to a paragraph.
Re-arrange two sentences, phrases, paragraphs, etc.
Mark these changes on your outline (which you will submit later).

3. Peer Editing Share your outline with a person at your table.
Select your worst paragraph in your opinion.
Your partner will read the paragraph backwards (last sentence first).
Your partner should highlight any awkward word choice and passive voice for you to change.

4. Question flood
Ask at least five questions of your partner to help them add detail to your paragraphs.
Who
What
Why
How
Where
When
How much?