1. Today’s Learning Objective:
Develop and write an initial response to an extract.
Analyse effective language by ‘zooming in and out’.

2. Health and Safety reminder
Explain fire exits and procedure.
Remind learners to keep bas and coats tucked away and be aware of trip hazards.
Explain Policy Central to protect learners using PC’s in the centre.
Explain first-aid procedure.

3. What do you want to achieve today?

4. Targets on your work:
Make a note of them. Spend 5 minutes addressing at least 2 ‘issues’ in your work and edit it.
List your spellings mistakes. Begin creating a list that you will save and later be tested on

6. Sri Lanka, just south of India, is a small island that is big on historical attractions, holy sites and natural beauty, including exotic birds, animals and marine life. Visitors to Sri Lanka will find white sandy beaches, more than 100 waterfalls, and a contrast between busy, bustling cities and pretty, peaceful towns. And don't forget the famous elephants, tea plantations and temples. Also located in the Indian Ocean are the 115 islands of the Seychelles. Renowned for beautiful beaches and crystal-clear turquoise seas, the Seychelles has a wealth of fauna and flora including rare plants. This really is a bird watching paradise due to the huge colonies of nesting seabirds.

7. Lord of the Flies

8. Texts imply things that aren’t stated explicitly.
For example, a reader might infer that Piggy (the overweight boy from LOTF) is insecure without the guidance of adults. We could further infer that he is a rather anxious boy who is unlikely to cope well with the situation on the island.
None of this is stated explicitly in the text. All of this can be inferred from his question to Ralph (the fair-haired boy):
“So aren’t there any adults at all?”
Ralph, on the other hand, is not concerned about this fact …

9. GAP
Genre
Audience
Purpose

12. Analyse
ZOOM IN on individual words, features or phrases to say how and why they are effective.
The word ‘…’ is effective because…

13. Focus on detail …

14. Zoom in and out …

15. QuAL
QuAL = Qu – Introduce or ‘embed’ a quotation A – Analyse (Zoom IN) L – Make a Link (Zoom OUT)

16. Hot Topics (SHEDSS) H&S E&D Safeguarding Hot topic
Every month new Hot Topics are introduced to promote SHEDSS
Why are these important?
H&S
E&D
Safeguarding
Online
Safety
Hot topic
PREVENT &
British Values

17. of different cultures & religions
Democracy
Individual Liberty
Tolerance
of different cultures & religions
Mutual Respect
Rule of Law

18. All the world's a stage…
The darkness pressed in on all sides.

19. Saleah: what does”i’m drowning in school work mean”
Stan: saleah It means there is so much homework, it’s like a sea which the student is struggling to stay afloat in, or get on top of. There are related metaphors: I could say I’m “submerged in (or by) work”, or I might be “up to my eyes/ears/elbows/armpits in paperwork”.
Belinda: It means there’s an overload of work which you can’t seem to get through *when your drowning you can’t seem to get through to the surface of the water*

20. Descriptive language

21. Homework for next week (min 300 words):
Exam Practice:
How does the writer use language to create a sense of place in the extract from LOTF?