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6. What CHALLENGES does London face?
Objectives
Outcomes
To understand a full range of challenges that London faces
To improve essay writing skills
To evaluate the scale of the challenges facing London
Highlighted notes on the challenges London faces
A completed table in HW booklets for homework
A fully written essay on the challenges London Faces

7. What CHALLENGES does London face?
Read carefully in SILENCE through the information sheets about London and the various challenges it faces, highlight key points on the sheet
Complete the diamond rank exercise in pairs;
Which of the challenges is greatest to London?
Which ones pose the least challenge and can be easily solved?
YOU WILL NEED TO DISCUSS THIS and have reasons for your ideas
Answer the essay question –
For a city in the UK that you have studied DISCUSS the extent to which it can tackle the challenges it faces. (9 + 3 SPGST)

8. Diamond rank
In pairs rank the challenges London faces in a diamond shape
Greatest challenge
Urban Decline & derelict buildings
Deprivation
Redeveloping brownfield sites
Inequalities in housing & education
Building on Greenfield sites
Urban sprawl
Waste disposal
Atmospheric pollution
Inequalities in health & Employment
Lowest challenge

9. Command word - Present key points about different ideas or strengths and weaknesses of an idea.
DISCUSS the view that cities cannot tackle the many challenges they face. Include reference to a city in the UK that you have studied (9 + 3SPGST)
You will need to cover more than one, but for the marks available not all of the challenges
Case study material is needed here. Factual evidence such as place names and data
Make a plan with your partner, what will you include and how will it be structured?
EXAMPLE paragraph. Point, Evidence, Analyse, Link (P.E.A.L)
One of the major issues facing the city of London today is the deprivation faced by many people across the city. In particular in…
I feel that with the right support London can tackle this challenge of deprivation.

10. Multi-Flow Map – IMPROVING ESSAY WRITING
Pattern or point
Evidence
Explain
Explain again with specifics
Command words
Definition of key Geography term
Pattern or point
Evidence
Explain
Explain again with specifics
DISCUSS the view that cities cannot tackle the many challenges they face. Include reference to a city in the UK that you have studied (9 + 3SPGST)
Pattern or point
Evidence
Explain again with specifics
Explain

11. DISCUSS the view that cities cannot tackle the many challenges they face. Include reference to a city in the UK that you have studied Mark your response using the mark scheme
Level 1 (Basic) 1–3
Level 2 (Clear) 4–6
Level 3 (Detailed) 7–9
Links to the question – the idea of challenges
Use of command word – DISCUSS
Use of place or Case study information
Knowledge and understanding
Organisation of written work
Simple ideas about the challenges a city faces. Perhaps list-like with little or no reference to an example.
Largely descriptions saying what the challenges are with no DISCUSSION of the size of the challenge and if it can be tackled.
Place-specific information is vague or absent.
Shows slight knowledge and little understanding of the issues and how it might be managed
Explanation is limited
Answer may be partial, incomplete and poorly organised. Limited structure to answer and basic use of geographical terminology.
Linked statements describing the challenges the city faces strategies, with some explanation of how challenges is reduced.
Starts to discuss, a basic idea that some issues can be tackled more easily than others
A case study is named and the explanation is relevant to the location.
Provides a reasonable explanation showing some knowledge and clear understanding of challenges facing cities.
Response shows some organisation and development.
Detailed explanation of how a city in a named location has challenges.
Credit only one case study or example.
The discussion is clear and balanced, with some challenges acknowledged as harder to resolve than others
A comprehensive and place-specific answer. With factual evidence from the place
Provides a response that is well explained using accurate knowledge and sound thorough understanding,
Is well organised and develops 2 or more challenges

12. Intermediate performance Threshold performance
Spelling, punctuation, grammar and use of specialist terminology (SPGST)
High performance
Intermediate performance
Threshold performance
3 marks
2 marks
1 marks
In the context of the level of demand of the question, learners spell, punctuate and use grammar with consistent accuracy and also use specialist terminology with consistent accuracy.
In the context of the level of demand of the question, learners spell, punctuate and use grammar with considerable accuracy and also use specialist terminology with considerable accuracy.
In the context of the level of demand of the question, learners spell, punctuate and use grammar with reasonable accuracy and also use specialist terminology with reasonable accuracy; any errors do not hinder meaning in the response.

13. How can we improve our essay writing for next time?
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15. COPYRIGHT NOTICE
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This document can be copied, revised, customised and used for the use of a PAID SUBSCRIBING SCHOOL ONLY under the conditions of the School Subscribers Agreement found at
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Copy, print out or otherwise reproduce any Resources (in whole or part) for any commercial use or any of purpose except as permitted under the School Subscribers Agreement or authorised in advance by in writing;
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