1. Describe the Beach

2. Use Figurative Language!
HISMOP Hyperbole – It was hotter than the sun. Idiom –The sun will fry your brains. Simile – It’s as calming as a wave pool. Metaphor –The beach is the bomb. Onomatopoeia –Whish! Personification –The waves grabbed my feet The wind danced with me.

3. Ways to start your writing!
Onomatopoeia Shocking statement or fact A question The time of the year

4. Begin Brainstorming!

5. Brainstorm!

6. Brainstorm!

7. Brainstorm!

8. Brainstorm!

9. Think about 3 things that you can describe at the beach.

10. Describe each then choose 3.
Water
Sand
People
Sky
Boats
Ski Jets

11. Introduction Paragraph Detail Paragraph
Organize your paper into 5 paragraphs.
Introduction Paragraph Detail Paragraph
Detail Paragraph
Conclusion Paragraph

12. Write your outline. Introduction Paragraph (Topic) Detail Paragraph
Elaborate/ Use sensory detail.
Elaborate/ Use sensory detail.
Elaborate/ Use sensory detail.
Elaborate/ Use sensory detail.
Elaborate/ Use sensory detail.
Elaborate/ Use sensory detail.
Elaborate/ Use sensory detail.
Elaborate/ Use sensory detail.
Elaborate/ Use sensory detail.
Conclusion Paragraph

13. Begin writing your rough draft.
Student’s Name
Date
Teacher’s Name
Descriptive
Begin writing your rough draft.

14. Revise A.R.M.S. Add, Remove, Move Around, Substitute Student’s Name
Date
Revise
Teacher’s Name
Descriptive
A.R.M.S.
Add,
Remove,
Move Around,
Substitute

15. Edit Check: spelling capitalization punctuation grammar
Student’s Name
Date
Teacher’s Name
Descriptive
Edit
Check:
spelling
capitalization
punctuation
grammar
sentence structure
subject/verb agreement
consistent verb tense
word usage

16. Publish your final copy.
Student’s Name
Date
Teacher’s Name
Descriptive
Publish your final copy.