1. Synthesis Essay Feedback
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2. Bravo: You Understand Synthesis!
According to my calculations, nearly 93% of you understand that synthesis means including different sources within one body paragraph.
In addition, that means that 93% of you can write a strong, unifying topic sentence that connects two (or more) different sources!
My work here is done.
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3. Bravo: Improved Quotation Integration!
Nearly all of you effortlessly blended your quotations into your essays. Bravo!
Two pieces of advice:
Edit your quotations when possible. Integrate the most salient portions into your essay.
Focus on the key language or aspects of the quotation and talk about the significance of those words!
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4. Bravo: Syntax and Diction Were Better!
Your writing flowed better this time—the vocabulary (diction) and phrasing (syntax) really improved.
If you can be mindful of your language usage on the AP exam, you might covertly bump up your essay score!
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5. Feedback: Do The Work
For those of you wanting higher scores, you must do three things:
Improve the quality of your ideas. Deep, original critical thinking is special. (Pulling quotes from online sources, however, is not.)
Sophisticated analysis that goes beyond superficial, redundant comments is remarkable.
Fluid, erudite sentences distinguish the 7s from the 9s.
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