1. How is revision different from editing?
Revising & Editing
How is revision different from editing?

2. Focus on Revision By making decisions about how to state your claim,
By making certain you have included reasons for your claim,
By making decisions about the evidence you have used to convince your reader,
And by making decisions about what you want your reader to do (call to action).

3. Focus on Editing
By making sure that capital letters are used correctly,
By making sure that paragraphs are divided accurately,
By making sure that spelling is accurate,
By making sure that punctuation is used properly,
And by making sure that your sentences vary in structure and length.

4. Be Careful of Writing Felonies
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Yeah
b/c, B4
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alot
Well, And, So, Because, (Not good sentence starters!)
Once upon a time…
My name is, and my story is about…
Dotting your is
Computer & Text Slang
In this essay I am going to tell you about…
The End