1. doc.: IEEE 802.15-09-0114-00-004g-Trends-in-SUN-capacity
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Project: IEEE P Working Group for Wireless Personal Area Networks (WPANs)
Submission Title: Proposed resolutions for CIDs 128, 129, 130, 131, 132, 133, and 134
Date Submitted: March, 2013
Source: Youngae Jeon, Sangjae Lee, and Sangsung Choi (ETRI), Soo-Young Chang (SYCA)
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Abstract: This document provides proposed resolutions for CIDs 128, 129, 130, 131, 132, 133, and 134 of LB#87.
Purpose: To provides proposed resolutions for CIDs 128, 129, 130, 131, 132, 133, and 134 of LB#87
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2. Comments for Sub-clause 5.1.14.1
CID 128 (Editorial)
CID 129 (Technical)
CID 130 (Editorial)
CID 131 (Editorial)
CID 132 (Editorial)
CID 133 (Editorial)
CID 134 (Editorial)

3. CID 128 (Editorial) Comment Proposed Change Proposed Resolution
CS: A
CID 128 (Editorial)
Comment
1st instance and def. of acronym GDB occur above in
Proposed Change
Remove acronym definition.
Proposed Resolution
(from) In step A, the SPC obtains the list of available TVWS channels from the geo-location database (GDB) through the Internet.
(to) In step A, the SPC obtains the list of available TVWS channels from the GDB through the Internet.

4. CID 129 (Technical) Comment Proposed Change Proposed Resolution
CS: A
CID 129 (Technical)
Comment
It is not clear here what "Fixed, Mode II, or Mode I Device" are
Proposed Change
Either use a footnote to refer to the FCC definitions or cross reference Table 4ig Device category where these are defined
Proposed Resolution
(from) Alternately, the SPC may obtain the list of available TVWS channels from another device (Fixed, Mode II or Mode I Device).
(to) Alternately, the SPC may obtain the list of available TVWS channels from another device.

5. CID 130 (Editorial) Comment Proposed Change Proposed Resolution
CS: A
CID 130 (Editorial)
Comment
Missing "described"?
Proposed Change
eg "…as described in...
Proposed Resolution
(from) In Step B, the SPC transmits an enhanced beacon containing a TMCTP Extended Superframe Specification IE as in
(to) In Step B, the SPC transmits an enhanced beacon containing a TMCTP Extended Superframe Specification IE as described in

6. CID 131 (Editorial) Comment Proposed Change Proposed Resolution
CS: A
CID 131 (Editorial)
Comment
Missing "by" & "described"
Proposed Change
Change to "…request a DBS allocation by sending a DBS request, as described in ,"
Proposed Resolution
(from) Upon successful reception of the beacon from the SPC, the TMCTP-child PAN coordinator may request a DBS allocation sending a DBS request, as in , to the SPC.
(to) Upon successful reception of the beacon from the SPC, the TMCTP-child PAN coordinator may request a DBS allocation by sending a DBS request, as described in , to the SPC.

7. CID 132 (Editorial) Comment Proposed Change Proposed Resolution
CS: A
CID 132 (Editorial)
Comment
Remove comma after "Step C"
Proposed Change
ie "In Step C of the example,"
Proposed Resolution
(from) In Step C, of the example, the SPC indicates pending data for the TMCTP-child PAN coordinator in its beacon.
(to) In Step C of the example, the SPC indicates pending data for the TMCTP-child PAN coordinator in its beacon.

8. CIDs 133 and 134 (Editorial) Comment Proposed Change
CS: A
CIDs 133 and 134 (Editorial)
Comment
CID 133: Superfluous "a"?
CID 134: Superfluous "or" in the text "and a channel allocated, or it or sends the DBS request"
Proposed Change
CID 133: eg "...reporting the slot and channel allocated, "
CID 134: "and a channel allocated, or it sends the DBS request"
Proposed Resolution
(from) Upon receiving the DBS request, the TMCTP-parent PAN coordinator directly generates the DBS response frame reporting the slot and a channel allocated, or it or sends the DBS request command frame to the SPC and then receives the DBS response command frame from the SPC.
(to) Upon receiving the DBS request, the TMCTP-parent PAN coordinator directly generates the DBS response frame reporting the slot and the channel allocated, or it sends the DBS request command frame to the SPC and then receives the DBS response command frame from the SPC