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2 Writing From Memory. Writing about a real experience What are the benefits?

3 GCSE English Language Narrative Writing. A good story needs…

4 My Story Mountain Problem Resolution Build up Ending Opening

5 Problem Build up Resolution Opening Ending Disagreement Dilemma
More Characters Clues Events Sorting things out Build up Resolution Excitement Finally… Setting Happily ever after? Opening Main Characters Ending

6 Write about a time when you were disappointed.

7 Crafting – not Making. I have been disappointed many times in my life and today was no exception. Not only had my mother forgotten to sign the letter for the London trip (which meant that I now wouldn’t be going) but my sister had also used the last of my expensive moisturiser to go out with her loser boyfriend last night. Today was turning out to be one big disappointment! I really wanted that new pair of trainers but when I finally arrived in Sports Direct, they had sold out of my size. What a disappointment. Today wasn’t going my way. I don’t want to come across as some sort of spoilt child who always gets her own way. I don’t want you, reader, to think that I make a habit of ranting on like this. In fact, I want you to know that I consider myself to be a sane, rational and reasonable human being…most of the time. However, in life, bad things happen. Sometimes, really bad things happen! Today was one of those days. What happened? I hear you ask. Well, today I was to receive the greatest disappointment of my life.

8 Write about a time when you felt embarrassed.
Write an opening paragraph which contains the following: Two different sentence types (questions, sentences, exclamations) A sentence with three adjectives A sentence which sets the scene In addition: Rule of three/tripling Three sentence types A change of tense A simile and or metaphor

9 20 marks content 15 marks accuracy
50% D 17 60% C 21 70% B 25 80% A 28 90% A* 32


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