1. Narrative Writing #6

2. Brainstorming Changed my mind She said “Yes” Brought a smile
A few works
Changed my mind
Brought a smile
Different response
Saved the girl’s life
Tried one more time
She said “Yes”

3. Brainstorming Changed my mind She said “Yes” Brought a smile
A few works
Changed my mind
Brought a smile
Different response
Saved the girl’s life
Tried one more time
She said “Yes”

4. A pen is held The pen is in hand The holding is loose The tapping is against the desk The tapping is the pen I am looking for something new I am looking for something exciting
Holding the pen
loosely in my hand,
I tap it against
the desk,
looking for something new,
looking for
something exciting.

5. Inspiration takes hold The inspiration is sudden My hands dance across the keyboard I let the ideas are flow The ideas weave a picture The picture is beautiful
Inspiration takes hold
suddenly
and
my hands dance
the keyboard,
letting the ideas flow
they weave a
beautiful
picture.

6. I click the mouse The clicking mutes the music Silence fills the room again
Clicking the mouse,
the music mutes
and
silence fills
the room again.

7. The pirate captain walks onto the screen The image becomes clearer The clarity comes with each key stroke The image is initially blurred
The pirate captain walks onto the screen,
the clarity of
the image
blurred
becoming clearer
with each
keystroke.

8. His chest is heaving His eyes are searching The captain looks over the remaining crew The crew are in front of him His strong features command His purposeful movements command The commanding is for attention
His chest heaving,
his eyes searching,
the pirate
captain looks over the remaining crew
in front of him,
his purposeful movements
commanding attention.

9. The pirate was known as Rumple The people trembled The people cleared a path for him The pirate pushed his way down the street The street was crowded
The people trembled
and cleared a path as
the pirate,
known as Rumple,
pushed his way down the
crowded
street.

10. Rumple regretted The regret was his action The pirate left something behind The item was more valuable than treasure
He regretted
leaving behind something
more valuable
than treasure.

11. He searched for the woman The woman held his heart The woman challenged him The woman pushed him in new directions The directions were strange
He searched for the woman
who
held his heart
because
she challenged him,
and pushed him in
strange
new directions.

12. Without her he was nothing She was him compass If he lost her, he had no bearing
She was his compass,
and without her
he had no
bearing.

13. This girl was the reason the fool was here He was here is Taiwan He was in the mountains He was searching
The girl was the reason
the fool was here
searching
in the mountains
of Taiwan.

14. The first mate was sure The sure was in seeing He saw her face Mary’s face was pale Mary’s face was lost in the crowd
The first mate was sure
he had seen
Mary’s pale face
in the crowd.