1. Self Edit English 2 Mrs. Foster
“Two Kinds” DJ
Self Edit
English 2
Mrs. Foster

2. Evidence & Set up Highlight your textual evidence and citation in blue
Highlight the word that indicates blame or fault, along with the character’s name in your set up, in pink (Ex: the mother is to blame for the relationship)
Highlight the background info/context in yellow
If your set up ends with “when he says” or “by saying” check to make sure a comma precedes your evidence
If your set up does not end with the above phrases, check to make sure a colon precedes your evidence.
Your ending period should come after the citation. No periods or commas at the end of your evidence.

3. Analysis Highlight in blue any references back to your evidence
NOTE: You should not Re-quote the whole evidence, just a couple words or phrases that you’re focusing on
Highlight in pink any form of the word “blame” or “fault”
Highlight in yellow where you tell HOW the evidence shows blame or fault

4. In the whole DJ…
Circle any first/second person pronouns (I/you). Get rid of them.
NOTE: If these pronouns are in the textual evidence, leave them alone.
Check spelling & make any needed corrections
Jing-mei
Check that the first word of all sentences & textual evidence are capitalized. Fix if needed.