1. Use of real-examples throughout Analysis of key points made
STRENGTHS
Use of real-examples throughout
Analysis of key points made
Clear evaluation using the essay question as a guide
Essay structure follows the suggested pattern
Overall conclusion answers the essay question clearly and decisively
Terminology is used well and matches the voting behavior topic
WEAKNESSES
Lack of real-life examples
Key points are not explained fully
Terminology is lacking/confused
No/few attempts at analysis made
Evaluation does not match the essay question/points previously made
Essay structure does not follow suggested pattern
Overall conclusion does not answer the essay question
Writing does not make sense upon re-reading
OPPORTUNITIES for improvement
Complete a full redraft for marking
Revise notes on voting behaviour topic/ensure notes on voting behavior are completed in full
Attend supported study for help with subject knowledge/ essay structure
Ensure all work is re-read before hand in
THREATS to my progress
Work or training means I have little time for homework/revision right now
Not completing tasks in class because of chat/lack of focus
Crashing this course so I lack background knowledge and understanding