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Bell Work 1.6
Rowling and her young daughter were, when she wrote, living on state benefits, the first Harry Potter
novel, Harry Potter and the Philosopher’s Stone. Rowling who completed the manuscript on a manual typewriter. 6
5. A. NO CHANGE
B. as she wrote, were living on state benefits,
C. were living on state benefits, which was when she wrote
D. were living on state benefits when she wrote
6. A. NO CHANGE
B. Rowling completed the manuscript
C. Rowling, after completed the manuscript
D. Rowling’s completed manuscript

2. 5. D—Sentence Reorganization—misplaced modifiers 6
5. D—Sentence Reorganization—misplaced modifiers
When phrases and words are positioned incorrectly, sentences can become difficult to understand. The sentence should be revised by moving when she wrote after state benefits.
Rowling and her young daughter were living on state benefits when she wrote the first Harry Potter novel, Harry Potter and the Philosopher’s Stone.
6. B—Sentence Fragments
The underlined section is missing a verb, thus creating a sentence fragment. By adding the verb Completed, B turns the fragment into a complete sentence.