1. Guided Writing
(读后续写第一课时)
龙湾中学 金秀敏

2. 高三一模成绩 the steps of writing 题型 客观题 应用文 读后续写 平均分 71.2 9.7 14.7 得分率 75%
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the steps of writing

3. Focus on the plot(情节)
What’s the writing style of the passage? A. Narration (记叙) B. Exposition(说明) C. Argumentation(议论) ？
climax (高潮) ？
was tangled up by weed
development ？
wanted … to show off…
ending
beginning
went… without permission.

4. Focus on the writing purpose
What’s the writing purpose?
How did he feel?
regretful ？
What would happen later?

5. List key points Group discussion Paragraph 1:
Finally, after struggling for a minute or two, I still got pulled underwater ※underlined key words
1._______________________ ________________
2._______________________ ________________
3. _______________________ ________________ …
Paragraph 2:
When I woke up, I was in an empty room lying on a bed.
4. _______________________ ※underlined key words
5._______________________ ________________
6.________________________ ________________
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6. write down coherent sentences
Paragraph 1:
Finally, after struggling for a minute or two, I still got pulled underwater. (衔接句)_______________________
_____________________________________________ …
__________________________________(衔接句)
Paragraph 2:
When I woke up, I was in an empty room lying on a bed. ( 衔接句) ________________________________________
_________________________________________ …

7. Group discussion Paragraph 1:
Finally, after struggling for a minute or two, I still got pulled underwater. (衔接句) _ ※underlined key words
________________________ ________________
1._______________________ ________________
2._______________________ ________________
3. _______________________
_________________(衔接句)
Paragraph 2:
When I woke up, I was in an empty room lying on a bed.
(衔接句) _______________
4. ______________________ ※underlined key words
5.______________________ ________________
6.______________________ ________________
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1. plot 2. underlined key words 3. the beginning of each para.

8. The steps
● focus on the plot
● focus on the writing purpose
● focus on the first sentences of each paragraph
● focus on the underlined key words.

9. Homework
Finish the writing.

10. Thank you