1. Mon: Self Revision Worksheet Tues: Wed: Thurs: Fri:
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Mon: Self Revision Worksheet
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2. Monday
Copy the Agenda
Flashback: EDIT the paragraph using the symbols.
Bell Ringer: (Answer to the right of your paragraph)
What is one thing you did over fall break?

4. Learning Target
I can revise my narrative.
W 7.3

5. Self Revision Read back through your narrative once
Then complete the worksheet for Self Revision
Add to your narrative as you need to.
Be prepared tomorrow to have another peer read your narrative.
If you finish, keep it in your folder and work on your grammar homework DUE THURSDAY.

6. Tuesday AGENDA! Week 9 Flashbacks
Flashback: Complete the editing paragraph.
Bell Ringer: What is one thing you would like some help with when it comes to making your narrative better? Be specific.

8. Learning Target
I can revise my narrative.
W 8.5

9. Peer Conference I think you could work on improving _______by …
Discuss the 2 items you circled on the conference sheet. Explain why you circled those.
Read your narrative out loud and allow your partner to follow along while you read. (Do not stop to comment or correct anything.)
Your partner will then offer advice for both of your circled items.
I thought your narrative was effective when…
I think you could work on improving _______by …
Your partner will fill out the comment section of your paper.
Repeat Steps 1-4 for the other partner.
Then you each will complete the bottom portion of the conference form independently.
When you finish, work on your grammar homework independently.

10. Wednesday AGENDA! Week 9 Flashbacks
Flashback: Complete the editing paragraph.
Bell Ringer: What is one of your strengths as a writer when it comes to your narrative?

11. Learning Target
I can revise my narrative.
W 8.5

12. Peer Revision Silently complete the peer revision worksheet
Only ask questions when the timer goes off
At the end of class we will conference with our partners to explain our revising.
Revisions are DUE AT THE END OF CLASS.
If you finish while others are still revising…
work on your grammar homework – Due TOMORROW

13. FINAL DRAFT WRITING DAY TOMORROW
BRING MUSIC/ devices and earbuds if you would like to write your final draft tomorrow in class

14. Thursday AGENDA! Week 9 Flashbacks
Flashback: Complete the editing paragraph.
Bell Ringer: What is one thing you enjoyed about your partner’s narrative yesterday?

15. Learning Target
I can write my final draft, including my partner’s revisions.
W 8.5

16. FINAL DRAFT – DUE MONDAY
Typed or neatly written in black pen or pencil
Is improved compared to your rough draft
If you are typing at home or finished with your draft read your independent book silently.
Bring a book for FREE READ FRIDAY tomorrow!

17. Friday
AGENDA!
Week 9 Flashbacks
Everyone needs a red pen

18. Grade your flashbacks
2 points = Bell Ringer answered, complete sentence 3 points = Editing each paragraph 5 points per day TOTAL + ___ / 20

19. Learning Target
I can write my final draft, including my partner’s revisions.
W 8.5

20. FINAL DRAFT – DUE MONDAY
Typed or neatly written in black pen or pencil
Is improved compared to your rough draft
If you are typing at home or finished with your draft FREE READ FRIDAY!

21. FREE READING FRIDAY!
Expectations:
Reading
Silent
Still
Sit up
ENJOY!