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Answer
Allowing kids to use cell phones in school will save the school money.
Evidence
In the text it says, “The idea of the ‘Bring Your Own Technology’ initiative is beginning to be used by schools across the country as a way that they can save money by only buying devices for those who don’t already use them.”
Explanation/Analysis
I chose my evidence because it shows that it is not necessary for schools to buy enough technology for every student.
Elaboration
My old school did not have enough computers for all of us to use during class. Letting students bring their own phones and tablets to school will make it so that we have more technology to use at one time.