1. Historical/Biographical Essay Rough Draft

2. Directions Peer review in Red pen
Write “corrected by <you name>” on top on the first page
Answer the following questions in complete sentences commenting about their information: whether they are missing information, their information is not detailed enough or the things that are good.
Directions

3. Review his/her rough draft and make sure that all of the content that was checked for during the outline is included.
Content Review

4. Does it introduce the biographical/historical elements that will be used in throughout the essay?
Are they introduced well?
Is there a clear thesis that includes the core, the breakdown, and the source(s).
Style Introduction

5. Are the concrete detail, commentary 1, and commentary 2 in the basic order within each chunk? If he/she moved them around, does it still make sense?
Does he/she transition each element of the body paragraph well?
Style Body

6. Does it draw a conclusion based on all of the commentary stated
Does it draw a conclusion based on all of the commentary stated? Is it explained well? Why or Why Not?
Is there a clear closing thesis?
Does it only summarize? (It should not)
Referencing details to explain the conclusion is fine
Does it sate any new supportive facts/details? (It should not)
Style Conclusion

7. Format Is it: Typed Black/Blue Ink Font: Times/Courier/Arial
Size: 10/12
Margins: One Inch
Spacing: Double
Correctly headed and titled
Format

8. For next slide, make the corrections directly in his/her essay

9. Grammar Check Check for grammar errors, such as: Commas & Semicolons
Spelling & Capitalization
Contractions
Symbols & Abbreviations
Citations
Indenting
Grammar Check