1. In 5 minutes

2. Write a conclusion to the following question
To what extent did the Fundamental Laws of 1906 change government more than any other event in the period ?
(25 marks)

3. Add your name and them swap papers

4. Mark the work based on the following success criteria…..

5. Success criteria
Clearly signposts the conclusion e.g. in conclusion, overall – 1 point Use of analytical language – e.g. notable, significant, corroborate, challenge, crucially – 1 point for each example First sentence directly answers the question – 2 points Gives specific evidence to support view – 2 points Evaluates importance in comparison to other factors – 3 points e.g. although significant, impact was not comparable with the extent of impact of other changes Gives clear specific evidence to support an alternative viewpoint – 2 points Includes a concluding sentence – containing a clear judgement in relation to the question – 2 points

6. Level 6 – 13+ points
Level 5 – points
Level 4 – 7-9 points
Level 3 – 5-6 points
Level 2 – 3-4 points
Level 1 – 1-2 points

7. Now write your conclusion again using the same success criteria

8. 30 seconds

9. Success criteria
Clearly signposts the conclusion e.g. in conclusion, overall – 1 point Use of analytical language – e.g. notable, significant, corroborate, challenge, crucially – 1 point for each example First sentence directly answers the question – 2 points Gives specific evidence to support view – 2 points Evaluates importance in comparison to other factors – 3 points e.g. although significant, impact was not comparable with the extent of impact of other changes Gives clear specific evidence to support an alternative viewpoint – 2 points Includes a concluding sentence – containing a clear judgement in relation to the question – 2 points

10. Mark the work based on the following success criteria

11. Level 6 – 13+ points
Level 5 – points
Level 4 – 7-9 points
Level 3 – 5-6 points
Level 2 – 3-4 points
Level 1 – 1-2 points

12. Set a personal target