1. NGV SG Response to Comments per 802.11bd PAR/CSD
Nov 2018
NGV SG Response to Comments per bd PAR/CSD
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Bo Sun (ZTE)

2. Nov 2018
Abstract
This document contains the response of NGV SG to comments per NGV PAR/CSD
Bo Sun (ZTE)

3. Comment 1 Nov 2018 Comment No. 1 Source Robert Grow (RAC Chair)
Commented Doc.
P802.11bd
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6.1 b registry activity
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Noting there will be new text referencing existing IEEE RA registries is helpful and proper.  But, there are a couple problems with the last sentence.  First problem, the RAC does not “control” the namespaces.  Registries are administered by the IEEE Registration Authority.  Second, “registration activity” in the 6.1,b question is not limited to IEEE RA administered registries. (The BOG has right of first refusal for registration activities defined in IEEE standards, and RAC Mandatory Coordination is not limited to only “registration activities” text related to IEEE Registration Authority administrated registries.) 
Proposed Changes
If true, a better sentence would be “It is expected that no new registries will be defined by the project.”
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Bo Sun (ZTE)

4. Comment 2 Nov 2018 Comment No. 2 Source Robert Grow (RAC Chair)
Commented Doc.
P802.11bd
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6.1 b registry activity
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The first sentence is appropriate for a revision, but problematic for an amendment primarily producing new text.  The amendment either will or will not include new text related to registration activity (what is noted in the PAR form instruction).  There are though a couple problems with the last sentence.  First problem, the RAC does not “control” the namespaces.  Registries are administered by the IEEE Registration Authority.  Second, “registration activity” in the 6.1,b question is not limited to IEEE RA administered registries. (The BOG has right of first refusal for registration activities defined in IEEE standards, and RAC Mandatory Coordination is not limited to only “registration activities” text related to IEEE Registration Authority administrated registries.) 
Proposed Changes
If true, a better sentence would be “It is expected that no new registration activity text will be included in the draft.”
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Bo Sun (ZTE)

5. Comment 3 Nov 2018 Comment No. 3 Source 802.3 Commented Doc. P802.11bd
Section
1.1
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project number – Per the EC web page, this project if approved will be P802.11bd.
Proposed Changes
Update project number
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Bo Sun (ZTE)

6. Comment 4 Nov 2018 Comment No. 4 Source 802.3 Commented Doc. P802.11bd
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2.1
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title – V2X needs to be expanded, presumably “Next Generation Vehicle-to-Everything (V2X)”.
Proposed Changes
V2X needs to be expanded, presumably “Next Generation Vehicle-to-Everything (V2X)”.
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Bo Sun (ZTE)

7. Nov 2018
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