1. Completing the story
读后续写之阅读与构思
Belinda

2. What story can you think of in Chinese literature(中国文学)when we mention butterflies?

3. Read for main idea
Who are mentioned in the story?
What is the story mainly about?

4. Read for plots
Q1: Did the man search for the woman after he recovered?
Q2: Why did the man and the doctor fall in love?
(Para.5) …but he was unhappy and searched for the woman desperately without eating and resting, asking every passer-by for her information.
(Para.6) It was said that pretty female doctor took good care of him when he was ill and that finally they fell in sweet love.

5. What is the possible ending of the story?
Discuss
What is the possible ending of the story?
Could the woman and the man’s love continue?
If so, how would the story develop?
If not, how would the story develop?

6. ________________________________________________________________
Read the given sentences
Infer and brainstorm by raising questions
The butterfly could do nothing but rest on the man’s shoulder off and on.__________________ __________________________________________________________________________
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God also felt sad and asked the butterfly whether she regretted for what she had done.__
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Q1:
Q2:
Q3: ……
Q1:
Q2:
Q3: ……

7. ________________________________________________________________
Para. 1
The butterfly could do nothing but rest on the man’s shoulder off and on.__________________ __________________________________________________________________________
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Why did the butterfly rest on the man’s shoulder on and off?
What would be the man’s reaction(反应)?
How did the butterfly feel at the man’s reaction?
What else could the butterfly do?
Q1:
Q2:
Q3: ……

8. ________________________________________________________________
Para. 2
God also felt sad and asked the butterfly whether she regretted for what she had done.__
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What would be the butterfly’s answer? Why?
If she regretted, what would she/God say and do? If she didn’t regret, what would she/God say and do?
What is the possible ending of the story?
Q1:
Q2:
Q3: ……

9. ________________________________________________________________
Read the underlined key words
love the man the church tears God regret helplessly the butterfly sweet heartbroken
Para. 1
The butterfly could do nothing but rest on the man’s shoulder off and on.__________________ __________________________________________________________________________
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10. ________________________________________________________________
love the man the church tears God regret helplessly the butterfly sweet heartbroken
Para. 2
God also felt sad and asked the butterfly whether she regretted for what she had done.__
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11. Design your plot
The butterfly could do nothing but rest on the man’s shoulder off and on.___________________________ ______________________________________________________________________________________
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God also felt sad and asked the butterfly whether she regretted for what she had done.__________________
Para.1
Why did the butterfly rest on the man’s shoulder on and off?
What would be the man’s reaction(反应)?
How did the butterfly feel at the man’s reaction?
What else could the butterfly do?
Underlined key words: the butterfly, the man, tears, heartbroken, helplessly,…
Para. 2
What would be the butterfly’s answer? Why?
If she regretted, what would she/God say and do? If she didn’t regret, what would she/God say and do?
What is the possible ending of the story?
Underlined key words:
the butterfly, God, regret, love, ….

12. Homework Complete your story and make a self-assessment
Paragraph 1
The butterfly could do nothing but rest on the man’s shoulder off and on.___________________________ __________________________________________
Paragraph 2
God also felt sad and asked the butterfly whether she regretted for what she had done.______________
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Self-assessment自评表
content
Is your plot reasonable or logical?
language
Is the language accurate and rich?
Is the tense correct?