1. Comp 3, LAP 3, Day 11 Refutation and Conclusion information
Turnitin.com review
Paragraphing reminders

2. Homework Finish Rough Draft, Bring it to class.
Read the short story chosen on the next slide. It’s located on the website.
Open Labs
Vocab Lesson 6 work is due J day; test is available through K day.
Sample Essay open lab is due B day, 11/19.
Peer Edit forms due E day.
Final Copy of essay is due E day, 11/22 via paper and turnitin.com

3. Story options… “The Most Dangerous Game” “The Phoenix”
“Where are You Going, Where Have You Been?”

4. Body Paragraph #4
Refutation Paragraph– States your opposition’s side and counters their argument with logic.

5. Body Paragraph #4
Topic Sentence: State your opposition’s claim and explain their side.
Provide at least 2 CQE’s (Context, Quote/Paraphrase, Explanation) explaining why your opposition is wrong.
Provide a concluding sentence.

6. Sample Body Paragraph #4
Use one of the student samples in your files

7. Conclusion Include these things in this order:
Restate your position statement
Restate your main 3 claims
Provide a call to action– requesting your audience to do, think, or support something.
Do NOT include any new information!!!

8. Sample concluding paragraph
In summary, the death penalty should be abolished for many reasons. First, the death penalty can take and has taken many innocent lives. Second, the death penalty costs more than incarceration for life. Finally, the death penalty fails to give the offender a chance for rehabilitation or a change of heart. People should protest and get petitions signed in order get the United States to create an amendment or doctrine that abolishes the use of the death penalty anywhere in the United States. In doing this the United States could save lives, save money, and change lives of offenders for the better. (1,364)

9. Turnitin.com

10. Logical fallacies P. 477 1. appeal to ignorance 6. Either/or
2. appeal to pity 7. half truths
3. bandwagon 8. oversimplification
4. broad generalization 9. slanted lang.
5. circular thinking 10. testimonial
Usually we do this with clickers to go over the worksheets

11. Contractions and Academic Voice

12. Questions
Don’t use questions in your body paragraphs– make them into statements.
Ex. “Recycling 2 lbs of paper could save 1 tree’s life” (Smith 5). Why wouldn’t anyone want to save a tree?