1. This paragraph is about Terry Foxs childhood
This paragraph is about Terry Foxs childhood. He was born July in Winnepeg Manitoba to Betty, and Rolly Fox. Terry had an elder brother Fred a younger brother Darrell and a younger sister Judith. His family moved in 1966, to Port Coquitlam British Colombia. His parent’s were very protective of there children. It was through his parents that Terry developped his stubborn dedecation towards whatever he would work towards. Accordingly Terry would use these beginning family values throughout his life.

2. Corrected Copy
Terry Fox’s childhood included a family that loved and cared for each other. He was born on July 28, 1958, in Winnipeg, Manitoba to Betty and Rolly Fox. Terry had an elder brother Fred, a younger brother Darrell and a younger sister Judith. His family moved in 1968 to Port Coquitlam, British Colombia. His parents were very protective of their children. Terry and his parents were both stubborn, but this character trait helped him develop his dedication towards accomplishing his goals. Accordingly, Terry would use these beginning family values throughout his life.

3. 801’s Parts of the Paragraph Cake
Terry Fox’s childhood included a family that loved and cared for each other. He was born on July 28, 1958, in Winnipeg, Manitoba to Betty and Rolly Fox. Terry had an elder brother Fred, a younger brother Darrell and a younger sister Judith. His family moved in 1968 to Port Coquitlam, British Colombia. His parents were very protective over their children. Terry and his parents were both stubborn, but this character trait helped him develop his dedication towards accomplishing his goals. Accordingly, Terry would use these beginning family values throughout his life.

4. 802’s Parts of the Paragraph Cake
Terry Fox’s childhood included a family that loved and cared for each other. He was born on July 28, 1958, in Winnipeg, Manitoba to Betty and Rolly Fox. Terry had an elder brother Fred, a younger brother Darrell and a younger sister Judith. His family moved in 1968 to Port Coquitlam, British Colombia. His parents were very protective over their children. Terry and his parents were both stubborn, but this character trait helped him develop his dedication towards accomplishing his goals. Accordingly, Terry would use these beginning family values throughout his life.