1. Starter
Once given a number, spend a few minutes thinking how you would describe this from your characters viewpoint.
1= tour company rep; 2= water sports enthusiast; 3= an artist; 4= film company rep; 5= a wildlife lover; 6= a poet; 7= an ice cream company rep; 8= holiday maker; 9= photographer; 10= yourself.

2. Peer Mark
Key advice
Fill out sheet – read feedback/example essay

3. General Observations
1 – Introduction paragraph need to be direct but also need to give some outline or refer to the question. Giving a quote still works.
2 – Wider reading improving, it is selection of appropriate material and giving personal insight into how they are relevant.
3 – Showing clear understanding of foundations but too many spent too long saying what virtue ethics is.
4 – Lack of explanation of historical context (enlightenment/feminism etc) how VE developed.

4. General Observations
5 – Not enough on modern scholars eg Anscombe, Slote, Gilligan.
6 – Writing style needs to have a direct structure and consistent line of thought rather than agree/disagree agree/disagree conclusion.
7 – Scholars used but in correct way
8 – Key terms used correctly and often eg Humean

5. Q and A Free will – spec, front sheet, checklist
“There was once a man who said damn, it is born in upon me I am, I am an engine the moves, in predestinate grooves, I am not even a bus I’m a tram.”
Explanations…Your poetic viewpoint on free will