1. December 12, 2016
Quickwrite:
Write about a time when you or someone you know learned something that had a negative impact on your life
(Use your last quickwrite paper and
write at least 5 sentences!)

2. Objectives
You will revise and edit draft #1 of your partner essay in order to improve your composition before submission to teacher for R&E #2
You will create several short answer notes by recording your ideas and text evidence for group discussion and assimilation
Next, you will work by yourself to construct one score 3 SAR by developing a correct assertion, embedding text evidence, utilizing higher level vocabulary, and creating advanced commentary

3. Revise & Edit Partner Essay
Look at the comments on your essay
Click on them to see where the comment refers to and then make the change if you agree with it
Review the yellow sheet, and make changes as needed
Your revised essay is due by in 15 mins!

4. SAR Idea Share
For each question, write down your assertion and two pieces of text evidence (5 mins.)
Switch with another group, and repeat the process