1. Rime of the Ancient Mariner: Part VI
By: Sofie Belanger, Christian Belanger, Victoria Hammitt

2. But tell me, tell me! speak again, Thy soft response renewing—
Dialogue between two demons
Confusion over unnatural motion of ship; why is it moving so fast?
Demons are somewhat stand-ins for readers, asking/answering questions
Alliteration
simile - compares ocean to slave before his lord, the Moon
Personification of moon and sea
blast = wind
Moon's pull controls the direction of the ocean's currents
FIRST VOICE.
But tell me, tell me! speak again,
Thy soft response renewing—
What makes that ship drive on so fast?
What is the ocean doing?
SECOND VOICE.
Still as a slave before his lord,
The ocean hath no blast;
His great bright eye most silently
Up to the Moon is cast—
If he may know which way to go;
For she guides him smooth or grim.
See, brother, see! how graciously
She looketh down on him.

3. But why drives on that ship so fast, Without or wave or wind?
Persists in questioning (annotations state that the ship is moving faster than human life could bear)
According to second demon, a vacuum is created ahead of ship, and the air behind pushes it forwards
FIRST VOICE
But why drives on that ship so fast,
Without or wave or wind?
SECOND VOICE
The air is cut away before,
And closes from behind.
Fly, brother, fly! more high, more high!
Or we shall be belated:
For slow and slow that ship will go,
When the Mariner’s trance is abated.

4. I woke, and we were sailing on As in a gentle weather:
Back to ancient mariner
Calm, tranquil scene, juxtaposed with last sentence of stanza, which startles the reader
Anaphora - repetition of 'all'
Charnel-dungeon - a place to store dead bodies
Ordeal is not yet over
His inability to turn away is reminiscent of the wedding guest's inability to turn away from the mariner
I woke, and we were sailing on
As in a gentle weather:
’Twas night, calm night, the moon was high;
The dead men stood together.
All stood together on the deck,
For a charnel-dungeon fitter:
All fixed on me their stony eyes,
That in the Moon did glitter.
The pang, the curse, with which they died,
Had never passed away:
I could not draw my eyes from theirs,
Nor turn them up to pray.

6. And now this spell was snapt: once more I viewed the ocean green,
He can now look away from the stares of the dead crew, the "spell was snapt."
It may seem that the scenery has somehow changed: "yet little saw of what had else been seen."
6 line stanza: Coleridge, "From Dante"
The gloss says that the curse that he has had to endure is "finally expiated."
Is his fortune going to change now?
Simile: He has felt the curse constantly surrounding him, filling him with "fear and dread," always a presence.
With this curse being atoned for now, will this feeling stop?
And now this spell was snapt: once more
I viewed the ocean green,
And looked far forth, yet little saw
Of what had else been seen—
Like one, that on a lonesome road
Doth walk in fear and dread,
And having once turned round walks on,
And turns no more his head;
Because he knows, a frightful fiend
Doth close behind him tread.

7. But soon there breathed a wind on me, Nor sound nor motion made:
A phantom wind, not a real presence, perhaps spiritual.
Maybe it is an indication that his sin is being "blown away."
Euphonic sounding stanza.
It is described as being a pleasant breeze, adding further to the theory that it is indication of something better to come for the Mariner, a blessing?
"mingled strangely with my fears" - he may not trust the wind at first, because of his previous encounters.
The ship is moving quickly, but not in a violent manner, with purpose.
These lines are a shift from the agony of his punishment to a slightly more cheerful and hopeful situation.
Could be a reference to the Odyssey.
Parallelism in the last stanza
But soon there breathed a wind on me,
Nor sound nor motion made:
Its path was not upon the sea,
In ripple or in shade.
It raised my hair, it fanned my cheek
Like a meadow-gale of spring—
It mingled strangely with my fears,
Yet it felt like a welcoming.
Swiftly, swiftly flew the ship,
Yet she sailed softly too:
Sweetly, sweetly blew the breeze—
On me alone it blew.

8. Oh! dream of joy! is this indeed The light-house top I see?
Is this the hill? is this the kirk?
Is this mine own countree?
We drifted o’er the harbour-bar,
And I with sobs did pray—
O let me be awake, my God!
Or let me sleep alway.
The harbour-bay was clear as glass,
So smoothly it was strewn!
And on the bay the moonlight lay,
And the shadow of the Moon.
The rock shone bright, the kirk no less,
That stands above the rock:
The moonlight steeped in silentness
The steady weathercock.
Exclamation of happiness! perhaps
Repetition of "is this," overwhelmed
He recognizes his home, what a sight it must be after such a journey.
He hopes that it is actually real, and not just a dream, or he wants to be sleeping forever so he won't have to wake and feel even more despair at his situation.
"my God!" - prayer, religious
If it were to be a dream, it would be a pretty cruel punishment to have his hopes raised and then dashed again.
It is a calm, moonlit night, no wind, very silent. It is a serene, peaceful scene.

10. And the bay was white with silent light, Till rising from the same,
-“Crimson” symbolises either or both of the blood of the Albatross and the blood of Christ by which the Mariner is cleansed of his sin.
-Internal rhyme, alliteration
- Vivid imagery
-By “crimson shadows” Coleridge probably intended nothing more than crimson reflections in the water, without realising that it is impossible to stand on a ship’s deck and see in the water a reflection of anything on the deck.
-Direct religious reference
And the bay was white with silent light,
Till rising from the same,
Full many shapes, that shadows were,
In crimson colours came.
A little distance from the prow
Those crimson shadows were:
I turned my eyes upon the deck—
Oh, Christ! what saw I there!
Gloss: The angelic spirits leave the dead bodies, and appear in their own forms of light.

12. Each corse lay flat, lifeless and flat, And, by the holy rood!
-In Christian mythology, the seraphim are the highest order of angels, exceeding all others in the fervour of their love. In medieval art, they are traditionally given a red colour.
- Repetition
- Direct religion references
- Light imagery
- Sound
Each corse lay flat, lifeless and flat,
And, by the holy rood!
A man all light, a seraph-man,
On every corse there stood.
This seraph-band, each waved his hand:
It was a heavenly sight!
They stood as signals to the land,
Each one a lovely light;
This seraph-band, each waved his hand,
No voice did they impart—
No voice; but oh! the silence sank
Like music on my heart.

14. But soon I heard the dash of oars, I heard the Pilot’s cheer;
-When a ship entered a large harbour in Coleridge’s day, it was often boarded by a pilot who took control of the ship to guide it efficiently into its assigned berth; or the pilot might have stayed in his own boat while leading the ship to its berth.
- Juxtaposition with silence and noise
-Religious references
-Real human contact can overshadow the horrors the mariner has experienced
- Stanza deviation: 6 lines
- Hope that his soul can be saved, but clearly it cannot be fully cleansed as he is still paying his penance
But soon I heard the dash of oars,
I heard the Pilot’s cheer;
My head was turned perforce away,
And I saw a boat appear.
The Pilot and the Pilot’s boy,
I heard them coming fast:
Dear Lord in Heaven! it was a joy
The dead men could not blast.
I saw a third—I heard his voice:
It is the Hermit good!
He singeth loud his godly hymns
That he makes in the wood.
He’ll shrieve my soul, he’ll wash away
The Albatross’s blood.

15. OVERVIEW: PART VI
This section is a change from the previously despairing situation that the mariner was experiencing. Now, his situation is hopeful as he realizes the good omens surrounding him. He even returns to the harbour of his homeland, a joyous occasion for the mariner. While the supernatural elements of the gothic influences remain, these spirits are much less dark and menacing than many of the previous beings. The return of sound and light signifies the return to the more normal and positive life.
The section is also full of religious references that could show how the Mariner has become a man of God, ever since his prayer/blessing of the watersnakes lifted the curse of the albatross from around his neck. The copious religious references and the presence of the demons indicate that there is great spiritual significance to what the mariner is experiencing. This section is the mariner's road to redemption, an upturn in events that followed the mariner's turn to prayer and God.