1. The Elements of an Excellent Essay

2. Title of Paper Conveys the main point of the essay in 10 words or less
Is creative and attracts the readers’ attention
Capitalize the first word and all of the important words that follow

3. Thesis Statement States the main idea of the essay
Doesn’t give a lot of detail (save the details for the next three paragraphs!)
May mention the main points of the body paragraphs

4. Thesis Statement
A thesis statement does not use the wording, “In this essay I am going to tell you about...”

5. Examples of Thesis Statements
Of all the types of dogs in the world, _____ are the best for kids since they are friendly, don’t grow too large, and have a long life span. or
There are many different types of dogs in the world, but only one type is the best for families with kids.

6. Examples of Thesis Statements
There are many different types of music on the radio; however, _____ is the best because it is relaxing, has a great beat, and doesn’t contain profanity. or
Many different genres of music are played on the radio, however ______ is the best.

7. Introduction Ends with a thesis statement
Give background information on the topic
Enhance the paragraph with adjectives, adverbs, and phrases such as appositives.

8. Body Paragraphs
Start with a transition word attached to the topic sentence telling what the paragraph is about
NEVER use the wording, “I am going to tell you about….”
Fill the paragraph with well organized supporting details

9. Conclusion “Echo” the thesis statement May end in a question
Leave the reader with an interesting thought or use humor

10. Argumentative Writing Prompt
Writing Situation: There is much discussion as to whether some video games are responsible for aggressive behavior. Many adults want violent video games banned.
Consider how you feel about video games and their effect on behavior. (prewriting)
Write an argumentative essay that supports your opinion.

11. Thesis Example: Thesis:
Video games are a bad influence on young people and should be banned because they increase world violence, cause poor health and result in people being lazy.

12. Essay Topics
Choose a topic below and follow the writing process to write an essay. You need at least 5 paragraphs and a minimum of 750 words.
Is torture ever acceptable?
Do curfews keep kids out of trouble?
Is child behavior better or worse than 10 years ago?
Should students be allowed to use phones for assignments in class

13. Does age matter in relationships?

14. Should students be allowed to use phones in class for assignments?

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