1. Revision Time!
You should have 2 pieces of descriptive writing from yesterday’s class.
These are just drafts right now.
Chose one to revise and share with a partner.
Step 1: Find one partner (Hint: you might have to make a new friend).
Step 2: When you find a partner raise your hand, and I will come around with your peer editing sheet.
Step 3: Follow the instructions on the peer editing sheet.
Step 4: Complete the sheet and submit your work by the end of the period.

2. Convert the following “tells” into “shows”
Mr. Bobweave was a fat, ungrateful old man.
She is a very pretty girl.
He liked this more than anything else.