1. Sentence Openings Vocabulary Ideas Structural Ideas
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Sentence Openings
Vocabulary Ideas
Adverbs
Adjectives
Verbs
Carefully
Decayed
Walking
Forlornly
Shattered
Limping
Dejectedly
Ruined
Heaving
Wearily
Gloomy
Resisting
Purposefully
Stark
Crying
Structural Ideas
repetition
short sentences
paragraphing / separate sections
links/ threads running through narrative
beginning and ending links
Connectives
Give students some time now to write up their descriptions – it maybe that they only focus on the first and second paragraphs.
Display this as students write up descriptions.