1. Writing for NBPTS Commentaries
The Three Kinds of Writing

2. An Introduction to The Three Kinds of Writing
Descriptive
Analytical
Reflection
REVIEW

3. Descriptive Writing

4. Descriptive Writing
Descriptive writing is a retelling of what happened in a classroom situation.
This kind of writing should allow the reader to visualize and understand what the teacher is describing.
It “sets the scene” for the assessors.

5. Description Is called for when the entry prompt uses verbs like:
state,
list,
describe, or uses
what or which
as the interrogatory opening words.

6. For Example:
“What are the relevant features of your teaching setting that influenced your selection of this assessment/prompt and these students?”

7. Description
When a teacher is asked to describe his/her response should meet these criteria:

8. Description Accurate and precise enumeration and/or explanation;
Number of pupils in group
Socio-economic make-up of group
Inclusion students/students with eexceptionalities or
special needs that may not be ‘officially’ identified.
Environment

9. Description
Clear and logical ordering of the elements or features of the event, person, concept, or strategy described; and

10. Description
Inclusion of supporting features of elements that would allow an outsider to “see” whatever is described.

11. Description Writing
Sample # 1
Sample # 2

12. Analytical Writing

13. Analytical Writing
Analysis depends on the interpretations the teacher made of what happened, examination of why the elements or event described are the way they are.

14. Analytical Writing
Shows assessors the thought processes the teacher employed
to arrive at the conclusions
made about a teaching situation.

15. Analysis is called for
When a prompt asks:
How,
Why, or
In what way(s)

16. Analysis is required when teachers are asked:
To identify a particularly successful moment in a sample of teaching and tell why they regard it as successful

17. Analysis is required when teachers are asked:
For a rationale; or

18. Analysis is required when teachers are asked:
What a student performance suggests about their teaching. (Here the teacher uses the evidence of student work to explain and illustrate his/her practice and also to use his/her practice to explain and provide a context for the student work.)

19. Analysis
When a teacher is asked to analyze, his/her response should meet these criteria:

20. Analysis
The subject of the analysis should be available to the reader (e.g. the student work, the videotape.) If such an artifact is not available, a clear description of what is being analyzed must be given prior to the analysis.

21. Analysis
The focus of his/her writing is not on what happened (descriptive) but rather on why it happened (analytical.)

22. Analytic Writing
Sample # 1
Sample # 2

23. Reflective Writing

24. Qualities of Reflective Writing
Reflection, a particular kind of analysis, always suggests self analysis, or consideration of practice. Reflection includes written considerations of what a teacher will do next time…based on his/her analysis of what happened and why it happened that way.

25. Reflection is called for when
The entry prompt asks the teachers to consider the successes of their lessons, and what they would do differently (or the same) and why.

26. Reflection When the teacher is asked to reflect, his/her response
should meet these criteria:

27. Reflection
The subject of the analysis should be available to the reader, i.e., the student work, the videotape.) If such an artifact is not available, a clear description of what is being reflected upon must be given prior to the analysis

28. Reflection
The focus of his/her writing is not on what happened (which is descriptive) or on why it happened (which is analytical) but on the implications for future teaching.

29. Reflective Writing
Sample # 1
Sample # 2