1. SOL Writing
Essay Rubric

2. Composition Central idea: sharply focused, narrowed by elaboration
Elaboration: details in sentences; illustrations, examples, reasons, and/or events within paragraphs
Organization: Strong: careful logic and order, strong, sophisticated lead and closure, appropriate and fluid transitions
Unity: all parts contribute to the dominant impression or idea of the paper; consistent point of view; no digressions

3. Composition Introduction Paragraph 3 body paragraphs
Conclusion paragraph
STAY ON TOPIC/Central Idea
1st person is acceptable for this essay

4. Written Expression
Vocabulary: precise; chooses words carefully, avoiding vague or anemic words
Information: precise and even information presentation
Voice: the writer’s presence is strong and enhanced by word choice and information given
Tone: the writer’s attitude is purposeful
Rhythm: purposefully varied sentence structure; modifiers and subordination are effectively imbedded

5. Written Expression
Use 11th grade words NOT: cuz, stuff a lot, lol, u, dumb
Use words correctly, don’t throw a big word in there you don’t know how to use correctly

6. Mechanics/Usage Standard English word order Sentences are complete
Avoidance of– run-ons
Usage correctness – agreement, word meaning
Mechanical correctness
Formatting
Spelling
Capitalization
End punctuation
Internal punctuation

7. Mechanics/Usage Capitalize the beginning of sentences!
Capitalize Proper Nouns

8. SOL Writing Prompt
Some young people view celebrities—including professional athletes, actors and musicians—as role models. Do you think that celebrities are good role models? Explain why or why not.

9. Prompt What are you asked to write about?
Can you use specific examples?
How do you stay on topic?