1. Using Language WRITING 襄阳四中 马春华
襄阳四中 马春华

4. Task
Design your own robot and write an article to describe it within 100 words.

5. Sally’s File Name: ________ Appearance:_____________
Character: ______________
______________
Ability: ________________
Job:_________________
Sally
Looks like Baymax
tender, considerate,humorous and good tempered
do housework;attend to my daughter
my daughter’s companion

6. Design
draw a picture of it
basic information like appearance, ability, character, job, etc.

7. Writing
Write an article to describe your android within 100 words.

8. Brief introduction Its ability
P1 P2 P3
structure
Brief introduction
Its ability
An ending

9. Writing Assessment (评价)
Handwriting
Is the handwriting clear, tidy or beautiful? (1 points)
Structure
Is the article divided into three parts? (3 points)
Content
Is everything to the point(切题)? (3 points)
Is the design impressive? (4 points)
Language
Is there any advanced vocabulary? (5 points)
Are there any good sentence patterns? (5 points)
Does the writer use any linking words? (4 points)
Writing Assessment (评价)

10. MY ANDROID My android, Sally, is as cute as Baymax
MY ANDROID My android, Sally, is as cute as Baymax. Though Sally is strong, it is kind. It is humorous and good tempered. Sally can use artificial intelligence to help me. It not only can do some housework, such as mopping floors and cooking, but it can take care of my little daughter through reading cartoon books and playing with her. Some funny stories are stored in its “brain”. It can make my daughter happy whenever it is necessary. Although it doesn’t help my work, it’s helpful to keep my daughter company. I hope it can be better programmed to do more things.

11. Using specific and eye-catching words
Though Sally is strong, it is kind.
tender and considerate
Sally can use artificial intelligence to help me.
relieve my workload

12. Using specific and eye-catching words
It not only can do some housework, such as
mopping floors and cooking, but it can take care of
my little daughter through reading cartoon books
and playing with her.
share/undertake
attend to
by means of

13. Using specific and eye-catching words
It can make my daughter happy whenever it’s necessary.
amuse
Although it doesn’t help my work, it’s good to
keep my daughter company. I hope it can be better programmed to do more things.
is of little help
bebeficial
perform more tasks

14. Using various sentence patterns
Though Sally is strong, it is tender and considerate.
Strong though Sally is
It not only can share some housework, such as mopping floors and cooking, but also it can attend to my little daughter by means of reading cartoon books and playing with her.
Not only can it share

15. Using various sentence patterns
Some funny stories are stored in its “brain”. It can amuse my daughter whenever it is necessary.
as a result of which,
As a result of it,

16. Using linking words
Strong though Sally is, it is tender and considerate. It is humorous and good tempered.
More importantly

18. Using linking words
Not only can it share some housework, such as mopping floors and cooking, but also it can attend to my little daughter by means of reading cartoon books and playing with her. Some funny stories are stored in its “brain”, as a result of which, it can amuse my daughter whenever it is necessary.
In addition

19. Using linking words
Although it is of little help for my work, it’s beneficial to keep my daughter company. I hope it can be better programmed to perform more tasks.
In the future

20. MY ANDROID My android, Sally, is as cute as Baymax
MY ANDROID My android, Sally, is as cute as Baymax. Strong though Sally is, it is tender and considerate. More importantly, it is humorous and good tempered. Sally can use artificial intelligence to relieve my workload. Not only can it share some housework, such as mopping floors and cooking, but also it can attend to my little daughter by means of reading cartoon books and playing with her. In addition, some funny stories are stored in its “brain”, as a result of which, it can amuse my daughter whenever it is necessary. Although it is of little help for my work, it’s beneficial to keep my daughter company. In the future, I hope it can be better programmed to perform more tasks.

21. homework
Rewrite your article and have your draft polished.

22. Thank you!