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短文改错十大思路 一.一致关系 1.But then there is always more mysteries to look into. are 2.Their word were a great encouragement to me. words 3.They didn’t want me to do any work at home. They want me to devote all my time to my studies so that I’ll get good marks in all my subjects. Don’t 4.He said he is busy. was 5.I think I liked those classes because I felt that it helped me understand how the world works. they 6.For example, when he bought a chocolate cake, he put them in a secret place that I couldn’t find. it
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二.连接手段 1.I think I liked those classes because I felt that they helped me understand what the world works. how 2.It was about noon we arrived at the foot of the mountain. ^ when 3.I have so greatly improved myself in English that since I attended it for the first time. 4.For example, when he bought a chocolate cake he put it a secret place where I couldn’t find. ^ it
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三.平行结构 1.As we climbed the mountain, we fed monkeys, visiting temples and told stories. visited 2.It’s easier to go downhill than climb uphill. ^ to 3.I looked up only to find my teacher Mr Zhang, who was standing beside me and looked at me kindly. looking
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四.非谓语动词形式 1.But then there are always more mysteries look into. ^ to 2.After learn the basics of the subject, nothing else seemed very practical to me. learning 3.My parents love me dearly of course and will do all they can make sure that I get a good education. ^ to 4.That is, a game of tennis making him very busy. made 5.Staying with an English family will provide you with a obance to Pvactise your speaking English. spoken
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五.删除冗言 1.Like most of my schoolmates, I have neither brothers nor sisters——in any other words, I am an only child. 2.We may be one family and live under the same roof, but we do not seem to get much time to talk about together. 3.For instance, on one night he played strong and loud music till four o’clock in the morning. 4.Evening came down. 5.The main problem was in that I always thought in Chinese.
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六.冠词的使用 1.For example, when I was a child, the rain was a mystery. 2.We may be one family and live under a same roof, but we do not seem to get much time to talk together. the 3.As everyone knows, it is famous mountain with all kinds of plants and animals. ^ a
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七.名词的数与格 1.I used to love science class—all of them—biology, chemistry, geography, physics. classes 2.They don’t want me to do any work at home; they want me to devote all my time to my studies so that I’ll get good marks in all my subject. subjects 八.词语搭配 1.I was so tired that I fell asleep at the moment my head touched the pillow. 2.My teacher advised me to keep my diary. a
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九.词性分辨 1.He never helped other. others或+people 2.But he is difference now. different 十.行文逻辑 1.Uncle Ben will also go back for Christmas. come 2.What things are in other homes, I wonder How
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