1. Writing
Revise your current work. Your rewrite is to be Journal 9. Complete only the section indicated below.
Polish Step 1 – thesis sentence.
Write a sentence introducing your 1st tone.
-If writing on only one tone, move on to evidence.
Write a sentence that presents your first, or only, chosen evidence.
Write two or more sentences that support your evidence, making a clear connection between your evidence and your thesis. Use your best comments from your notes. Conclude your 1st point.
Write a transition sentence that introduces your second point, for most of you it will be your second tone.
The original prompt is on the following slide.

2. Journal # 8 - Macbeth Act I Scene iii
In a journal entry, discuss the significance of Macbeth’s aside in Act I, scene iii as revealed through the dominant tone or the two different but complimentary tones in the passage.