1. State what is weak/incorrect about the following:
Sample Intro
What is power? Power is something that is difficult to achieve. In Macbeth, by William Shakespear, Macbeth and his wife try to get power by murdering many people. In the story, Lady Macbeth is responsible for Macbeth’s actions because she belittled her husband and plotted the murders.
State what is weak/incorrect about the following:
Hook
Title and author
Background on the play
Thesis

2. Hook
(1-2 sentences)
Background
on play
(2 sentences)
Background
on play specifically
related to thesis
(1-2 sentences)
Specifics on what
will be addressed in
Essay
(1 sentence)