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Everyone needs someone special in their lives.
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My best friend is Zeinab.
She is a student at Zayed University. She is the daughter of my father’s brother, so that means she is my cousin.
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Thesis
Zainab is a beautiful person with many appealing qualities, and she has a positive influence on me.
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This intro is 51 words

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My cousin Zeinab is my best friend because she is lovely inside and outside. She teaches me to be a better person
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I am a little sad because we go to different schools now, but I hope someday soon we will spend more time together.
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7. Mariam is a lovely person with a great personality.
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Mariam is a lovely person with a great personality.
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She has big blue eyes and shiny black hair. She likes to wear make-up, but really she does not need that because she is naturally beautiful. Also, her personality is outgoing and warm, and she is very helpful. For example, if you ask her for help with your homework, she will never refuse.
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She will always be beautiful, I know.

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Mariam is an active influence on me.
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For example, I love shopping with her because she can always make a good decision. Also, Mariam listens to me, and if she doesn’t understand me right away, she will try again the next day.
Concluding sentence
I always enjoy doing things with Mariam and learning from her.

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My cousin Zeinab is my best friend because she is lovely inside and outside. She teaches me to be a better person.
2. opinion, suggestion, hope for future
I am a little sad because we go to different schools now, but I hope someday soon we will spend more time together.
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