2. Proposal cannot actually be implemented as written.
Proposal lacks adequate visuals such as photos and charts.
Grammar and spelling errors abound.
Budget is not realistic and the proposal doesn’t justify it.
No explanation of how success will be measured.
Not clearly explaining the technical approach.
Introduction does not provide an adequate overview.
Information is left out (sections, budget, appendices).
Poor document design – document is ugly.
1. Executive summary doesn’t discuss strategy and fails to preview each section of the proposal.