1. Mistakes In Thesis:Improvement
Not a thesis writing style
Format
Problem statement-issues
Literature review – related & update: latest references
Ch 3-Methodology
Analysis

2. MGM4999A & B Revise A as well when you start with B Update and changes
Results
Analysis
Writing style – thesis format

3. Chapter 3 The Research Methodology
Research population
Sample
Data collection method
Question types and formats
Questionnaire construction

4. Continue…
The respondents-how many?, how distribute and collect back, response rate?
Response profile- usable response, incomplete, ?sent out
Statistical method used for data analysis-ranking? mean? Regression? Etc….
Summary

5. Ch 4/5 Results and Analysis Findings
Presents the results based on analysis
In table? Charts? – all with name
Need to analyses all the related data being collected

6. Chapter 5 Conclusions and recommendations
Only discuss on the results – based on what researchers done
May discuss on the impact-managers/management/organisation, employees, customers? – depends on your research!

7. Continue…recommendation
May suggest for the company
Contribution to the literature-if related
Contribution of the present study to organisation
Implications … may be to the managers, organisations, Malaysia etc.
Limitation and suggestions for future research
Conclusions

8. Bibliography/ References
Need to follow standard format
E.g
Book
- Andrews, D and Stalick, S (1994) Business Process Reengineering: The Survival Guide, Yourdon Press Computing Series
Journal/article
- Parasuraman, A, Zeithaml, V A and Berry, L (1988) “SERVQUAL: A Multiple-Item Scale for Measuring Consumer Perceptions of Service Quality’, Journal of Retailing, 12-40

9. Continue…
Appendices
- Support the research such as questionnaire, list of interview questions, photos, map, cutting paper etc.

10. Complete
Proofread, proofread, proofread!
All the best

11. General comment Format-layout-Font size-neat Numbering system
Content-subject line-tally
Title (towards the end)
Supporting material-table-source
Data collection – how, why, when

12. Comment-PROTON References-only websites?; journal, cutting paper, text
Questionnaire-revised-layout/format of the questions
Format-font size, numbering etc
Literature search-support-other chapters as well
Sources of references ? During explanation eg Ch 3, Ch 4

13. School-Coop Title? Pg number ?
Source of references-Literature support (need to improve a lot)
Chapter 3: incomplete; you’re writing in advance before things happened eg 3.6
Spelling error

14. Service online Acknowledgement-really really acknowledge people
Chapter 1-Introduction/background
Write the problem pg 5 before the research was conducted
Source/table/heading for chapters etc
Related information only
References-how

15. Driving school Preliminary part?-executive summary etc….
Define-source of references-eg pg 10
Literature with year
How to choose the sample
Revise the questionnaire (eg sect C) more clear/neat; error free; spelling

16. Tabung Haji Spelling error Layout-font size?-numbering system
References/ source with year
Coherent
Questionnaire-revise: may need open ended Q

17. Pajak Gadai References-keep up date Literature review Format/layout
Chapter’s content
Abstract/executive summary
Chapter 3
Revise

18. Pihak Berkuasa Tempatan
Literature
Source of information
Methodology
References-Journal? Text?
Questionnaire-any references
Revise

19. Air Asia Literature-references Methodology-how, when. Why
Chapters covered: Bab ?/heading-revise
Content

20. Credit card Need to revise again-proposal/Chapter 1-3 Prelimenary part
Chapters involved
Questionnaire

21. Reminder Chap 1????-guideline Introduction Problem Statement
Research background
Research objectives
Hypothesis
Conclusion

22. Overall Continue with Chapter 4 and 5
Don’t forget-improved/polished previous chapters
Put effort
Plagiarism
Try your very best
Aim for A