1. Introducing Quotations She said, Wait, what?

2. Introducing quotations ·When you include quotations, make sure that they are inserted so the paper still reads smoothly and flows. Avoid making halting sentences. All of another authors ideas and words should start or end using a signal phrase that names the author or otherwise alerts the reader that the information is from a source.

3. You cannot just plunk a direct quotation into your essay OR make the quotation too long. Macbeth should not have killed Duncan because the witches were just trying to fool Macbeth. All hail, Macbeth, that shalt be king hereafter!

4. Instead, introduce it using one of the following followed by a comma: According to Shakespeare, the second witch says, Shakespeare writes, The second witch greets Macbeth with In the play, Shakespeare states,

5. Combine any of these to make introductions and cut or paraphrase….. Put quotation marks around any exact wording! According to Shakespeare, the second witch says, All hail, Macbeth, that shalt be king hereafter! In the play, Shakespeare states, All hail, Macbeth, that shalt be king hereafter!

6. Consider incorporating just a small part of the quotation..note no commas when yours and the authors sentences flow together….. The second witch greets Macbeth and says that he shalt be king hereafter!

7. Author is neutralAuthor implies or suggests Author argues claims Author is uneasy or disagrees Author agrees commentsanalyzescontendsdisparagesadmits describesasksdefendsbelittlesagrees explainsassessesdisagreesbemoansconcedes illustratesconcludesholdscomplainsconcurs notesfindsinsistscondemnsgrants observespredictsmaintainsdeplores points outproposesdeprecates recordsrevealsderides relatesshowslaments reportsspeculates sayssuggests seesproposes thinks writes

8. In text citations You must give credit to the author whether you quote directly or paraphrase! Use citationmachine.net to help you You must complete a citation for your Works Cited page for EACH author For your in-text citation, you must list the authors LAST NAME and PAGE # with NO punctuation inside parenthesis for MLA. Example: (Shakespeare 12)

9. In text citations Insert the in-text citation right after the quote or paraphrase… OUTSIDE the quotation marks INSIDE the punctuation The second witch greets Macbeth and says that he shalt be king hereafter!(Shakespeare 12).

10. 1 st Body paragraph qStrong, clear topic sentence qSentence has examples (quote or paraphrase) qIn text citation qSupporting sentences have analysis/proof/own words

11. Transition/ state your side/state the reason First, Macbeth should not kill Duncan just because the witches told him so.

12. 1 st Body paragraph qStrong, clear topic sentence qSentence has examples (quote or paraphrase) qIn text citation qSupporting sentences have analysis/proof/own words

13. Signal phrase/ quotation or paraphrase In the play, Shakespeare states, All hail, Macbeth, that shalt be king hereafter!

14. 1 st Body paragraph qStrong, clear topic sentence qSentence has examples (quote or paraphrase) qIn text citation qSupporting sentences have analysis/proof/own words

15. Parenthesis with author name and page number ·OUTSIDE the quotation marks ·INSIDE the punctuation In the play, Shakespeare states, All hail, Macbeth, that shalt be king hereafter! (Shakespeare 12).

16. 1 st Body paragraph qStrong, clear topic sentence qSentence has examples (quote or paraphrase) qIn text citation qSupporting sentences have analysis/proof/own words

17. During the 15th century when witchcraft was practiced, many believe the hags were on earth to tempt kings and men. Shakespeare's witches give Macbeth vague clues to his future. They call him king but give no indication of how this is to come to be. The witches put a temptation in front of Macbeth and watch to see if he will act upon it. Macbeth has a choice to make. He can ignore these spirits, or he can read into their prophecies and take matters into his own hands. In Macbeth's case, he should act as an honorable noble would and let Duncan finish his reign. Consider answering WHY or SO WHAT if I were to ask you, "Why do you think that?" Show INSIGHT and PROVE your point by what you know from our pre-reading and what actually happens IN THE PLAY (not the real Macbeth's life).

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19. First, Macbeth should not kill Duncan just because the witches told him so. In the play, Shakespeare states, All hail, Macbeth, that shalt be king hereafter! (Shakespeare 12). During the 15th century when witchcraft was practiced, many believe the hags were on earth to tempt kings and men. Shakespeare's witches give Macbeth vague clues to his future. They call him king but give no indication of how this is to come to be. The witches put a temptation in front of Macbeth and watch to see if he will act upon it. Macbeth has a choice to make. He can ignore these spirits, or he can read into their prophecies and take matters into his own hands. In Macbeth's case, he should act as an honorable noble would and let Duncan finish his reign.