1. Derek’s full. Stop.
A Story

2. Derek woke up, went downstairs and ate his cat

3. Derek woke up, went downstairs and ate
Derek woke up, went downstairs and ate. His cat was playing in his cereal bowl

4. His cat was playing. In his cereal bowl Derek had his favourite nan

5. In his cereal bowl Derek had his favourite. Nan had bought it him.

6. On the radio Derek could hear his favourite pop singer - his mum

7. On the radio Derek could hear his favourite pop singer
On the radio Derek could hear his favourite pop singer. His mum was hoovering up his dad

8. His mum was hoovering up. His dad was smoking the front door

9. His mum was hoovering up. His dad was smoking the front door

10. His dad was smoking. The front door bell went outside

11. The front door bell went. Outside Derek could hear talking
The front door bell went. Outside Derek could hear talking. It was his sister's coat

12. It was his sisters. "Coat please Mum," said Tina
It was his sisters. "Coat please Mum," said Tina. Mum said, "Put the cups away out in the garden."

13. Mum said, "Put the cups away.“
Out in the garden it was raining people.

14. Out in the garden it was raining.
People stood out in the street waiting for the arrival of the bus stop.

15. People stood out in the street waiting for the arrival of the bus
People stood out in the street waiting for the arrival of the bus. "Stop dawdling Derek," said Mum, "or you'll be late yesterday."

16. "Stop dawdling Derek," said Mum, "or you'll be late
"Stop dawdling Derek," said Mum, "or you'll be late." Yesterday Derek had been off school with a cold dad.

17. Yesterday Derek had been off school. Dad said his teacher cried.

18. Dad said his teacher cried out to him at the school gate that Derek had missed an important lesson on writing.

19. Derek’s full. Stop.
The End