1. doc.: IEEE 802.15-11-0242-01-004g Submission March 2011 Kuor Hsin Chang, Bob Mason (Elster Solutions) Project: IEEE P802.15 Working Group for Wireless Personal Area Networks (WPANs) Submission Title: [Resolution for MR-FSK Generic PHY Comments - LB67] Date Submitted: [March 16, 2011] Source: [Kuor Hsin Chang, Bob Mason] Company: [Elster Solutions] Address: [] Voice: [] E-Mail:[kuor-hsin.chang@us.elster.com, robert.t.mason@us.elster.com] Re: [Comment Resolution for TG4g LB67 draft] Abstract: The presentation provides resolution for LB67 MR-FSK Generic PHY comments Purpose: Presented to the 802.15.4g SUN Task Group for consideration and discussion Notice:This document has been prepared to assist the IEEE P802.15. It is offered as a basis for discussion and is not binding on the contributing individual(s) or organization(s). The material in this document is subject to change in form and content after further study. The contributor(s) reserve(s) the right to add, amend or withdraw material contained herein. Release:The contributor acknowledges and accepts that this contribution becomes the property of IEEE and may be made publicly available by P802.15.

2. doc.: IEEE 802.15-11-0242-01-004g Submission March 2011 Kuor Hsin Chang, Bob Mason (Elster Solutions) Outline Comments to be resolved: –CID# 134, 142, 254, 369, 519 Recommend Resolution Resolution Detail

3. doc.: IEEE 802.15-11-0242-01-004g Submission March 2011 Kuor Hsin Chang, Bob Mason (Elster Solutions) Comments & Recommend Resolution CID# 134: –Comment (8.1.2.7, page 33, line 27): I don't understand the description. It says "Each bit corresponds to an array in phyGenericPHYDescriptors." According to Table 70, phyGenericPHYDescriptors is an array. –Proposed Change: Replace the word "array" with something more appropriate like "element.“ –Recommend Resolution: Accept in principle –Resolution: Change the wording to: “Each bit position corresponds to an element in phySUNGenericPHYDescriptors” CID# 142: –Comment (8.1.2.7.2, page 36, line 24): Text says, "phySUNGenericPHYDescriptors array consists of up to 16 MR-FSK Generic PHY descriptors." Table 70 shows a range of 0-16. –Proposed Change: Change the table range to 0-15. –Recommend Resolution: Reject –Resolution Detail: The total number of MR-FSK Generic PHY descriptors is 16. It is correct that the range of phySUNNumGenericPHYDescriptors is 0-16 (0 means the device does not have any Generic PHY Descriptors). Slide 3

4. doc.: IEEE 802.15-11-0242-01-004g Submission March 2011 Kuor Hsin Chang, Bob Mason (Elster Solutions) Comments & Recommend Resolution CID# 369: –Comment (8.1.2.7, page 32, line 54): If the MR-FSK Generic PHY operating mode is defined in the standard, it is on channel page 7 (standard-defined PHY operating modes). If it is on channel page eight, it is not defined in the standard, so it should not be mentioned in this document. –Recommend Resolution: Reject –Resolution Detail: As described in the draft, channel page 8 is used to specify the MR-FSK Generic PHY modes supported by the device. Slide 4

5. doc.: IEEE 802.15-11-0242-01-004g Submission March 2011 Kuor Hsin Chang, Bob Mason (Elster Solutions) Comments & Recommend Resolution CID# 519: –Comment (9.3, page 46, line 28-52): Since Generic PHY is for MR-FSK PHY only, the note "This parameter is not valid for other values of the ModulationScheme parameter" in the Description of "FSKModulationOrder", "FSKModulationIndex", and "FSKBT" is no more needed. –Proposed Change: Delete "This parameter is not valid for other values of the ModulationScheme parameter" from the Description of "FSKModulationOrder", "FSKModulationIndex", and "FSKBT". –Recommend Resolution: Accept Slide 5

6. doc.: IEEE 802.15-11-0242-01-004g Submission March 2011 Kuor Hsin Chang, Bob Mason (Elster Solutions) Questions?