1. 1 Quotations and Attribution Chapter 9 Fedler, Bender, Davenport and Drager

2. 2 “It’s hard for a wire editor staring into a computer in Louisville to evaluate the motives and credibility of people who whisper to reporters in Washington corridors.” (Linda Raymond, newspaper editor) (Linda Raymond, newspaper editor)

3. 3 3 sources of news info What people say What people say What reporters observe What reporters observe What is contained in documents What is contained in documents What people say are written as direct, indirect or partial quotes What people say are written as direct, indirect or partial quotes

4. 4 3 type of quotes Direct quotes - speaker’s exact words Direct quotes - speaker’s exact words “There’s too much of a trade-school atmosphere in journalism schools,” Ambrose said. Indirect quotes - paraphrase Indirect quotes - paraphrase Ambrose said journalism students should deal with ideas, not technique. Partial quotes Partial quotes Ambrose criticized the “trade-school atmosphere” in journalism schools.

5. 5 Use of Direct Quotes Use quotations to let the source talk directly to the reader Use quotations to let the source talk directly to the reader When it’s a matter of exactness, wit, rhythm, color or emotion When it’s a matter of exactness, wit, rhythm, color or emotion To tie opinion directly to a source To tie opinion directly to a source As evidence As evidence To reveal the speaker’s character To reveal the speaker’s character Direct quotes should be used to “make a point.” Direct quotes should be used to “make a point.”

6. 6 Sometimes, quotes are used to explain an idea or provide more specific detail Sometimes, quotes are used to explain an idea or provide more specific detail Quotations, when used properly, help DESCRIBE a story’s dramatic moments Quotations, when used properly, help DESCRIBE a story’s dramatic moments These details and description give writers authority over the topic and add credibility to the report These details and description give writers authority over the topic and add credibility to the report

7. 7 How to write direct quotes Don’t add words to direct quotes. Avoid parentheses. Don’t add words to direct quotes. Avoid parentheses. If you must explain a direct quote: If you must explain a direct quote: Set it up with the background. Set it up with the background. Instead of: “As soon as I get home,” Wilson said, “I’m going to bury him [his dog Rover] next to the doghouse.” Write: Wilson said he knows exactly where to bury his dog Rover. “As soon as I get home, I’m going to bury him next to the doghouse.”

8. 8 Beware of slang and dialect. Don’t needlessly embarrass people you quote, even if they are arrogant or stupid Beware of slang and dialect. Don’t needlessly embarrass people you quote, even if they are arrogant or stupid Be picky. Don’t overuse direct quotes. You’re not a court reporter! You’re not writing a transcript. Be picky. Don’t overuse direct quotes. You’re not a court reporter! You’re not writing a transcript. Direct quotes should not repeat information from a previous paraphrase or indirect quote. Don’t write: Direct quotes should not repeat information from a previous paraphrase or indirect quote. Don’t write: Clinton said he plans to go to Moscow next week. “I plan to go to Moscow next week,” he said.

9. 9 Generally, don’t use ellipses Generally, don’t use ellipses Never use ‘ … ’ at the start of a quote Never use ‘ … ’ at the start of a quote Rarely, you may use ellipses at the end of a quote for literary effect Rarely, you may use ellipses at the end of a quote for literary effect “I wonder …” His voice trailed off as Sherman pondered how life would have been different in Mississippi.

10. 10 Tips for Using Quotes Mix direct and indirect quotes. Mix direct and indirect quotes. Use paraphrasing and partial quotes to set up direct quotes. Use paraphrasing and partial quotes to set up direct quotes. She said the case is now in the jury’s hands. “We’ll have to wait and see what they do.”

11. 11 If you must explain a direct quote: If you must explain a direct quote: Use a partial quote. Use a partial quote. Instead of: Jones said, “SADD (Students Against Drunk Driving) is out of control on this issue (to outlaw happy hour).” Write: Jones said the group, Students Against Drunk Driving, is “out of control” on its push to outlaw happy hour.

12. 12 Using Indirect Quotes Reporters use indirect quotes when sources fail to express themselves effectively. Reporters use indirect quotes when sources fail to express themselves effectively. With a well-formed paraphrase, a reporter can emphasize the source’s most significant remark or make it clear With a well-formed paraphrase, a reporter can emphasize the source’s most significant remark or make it clear The paraphrase also helps the reporter avoid saying the obvious, evident or trite The paraphrase also helps the reporter avoid saying the obvious, evident or trite

13. 13 Using Partial Quotes Partial or fragmented quotes are confusing, awkward and probably unnecessary Partial or fragmented quotes are confusing, awkward and probably unnecessary Avoid using “orphan” quotes, where one or two words in a sentence are between quote marks Avoid using “orphan” quotes, where one or two words in a sentence are between quote marks Correctly used, a partial quote usually makes attribution clear when a certain phrase or word is controversial Correctly used, a partial quote usually makes attribution clear when a certain phrase or word is controversial

14. 14 Reporters sometimes use partial quotes if a speaker’s words are strongly emotional or highly opinionated Reporters sometimes use partial quotes if a speaker’s words are strongly emotional or highly opinionated Partial quotes sometimes imply a writer doubts the quote is true Partial quotes sometimes imply a writer doubts the quote is true She said she was “annoyed” by the article. Try removing the quotation marks Try removing the quotation marks She said she was annoyed by the article.

15. 15 It’s OK to say ‘said’ a lot. If it’s what he said, then say that’s what he said If it’s what he said, then say that’s what he said Substitutes like claimed, noted, pointed out, and maintained can lead the reader to suspect a value judgment Substitutes like claimed, noted, pointed out, and maintained can lead the reader to suspect a value judgment Substitutes like stated, asserted, and elucidated sound stilted Substitutes like stated, asserted, and elucidated sound stilted Editors don’t like for reporters to use words like hope, feel, believe, want or think. Editors don’t like for reporters to use words like hope, feel, believe, want or think.

16. 16 It’s OK to say someone added to a comment, if that’s actually true. It’s OK to say someone added to a comment, if that’s actually true. Sometimes it’s OK to use explained or noted: Sometimes it’s OK to use explained or noted: The Constitution guarantees freedom of speech, she noted. He explained he was late because of a dentist appointment. Use “according to” for documents only. ‘Said’ is fine for documents, too. Use “according to” for documents only. ‘Said’ is fine for documents, too.

17. 17 Levels of Attribution attribution means everything the source says may be published and directly quoted On the record attribution means everything the source says may be published and directly quoted is not for attribution, but can be quoted, but no source is actually named – “A source close to the investigation” Background is not for attribution, but can be quoted, but no source is actually named – “A source close to the investigation” Deep Background sources may not be identified in any way. Off the Record means the source’s information may not be used in the story.

18. 18 Attribution Protects You Whenever in doubt, attribute Whenever in doubt, attribute Always attribute information that could be disputed (especially about crimes) Always attribute information that could be disputed (especially about crimes) Always attribute opinion Always attribute opinion Attribute feeling and belief Attribute feeling and belief He said he felt sorry. She said she believes in God.

19. 19 If you attribute a paraphrase, you don’t have to put attribution in the direct quote that follows If you attribute a paraphrase, you don’t have to put attribution in the direct quote that follows Clinton said he believes human cloning is immoral. “So I call on Congress to ban the cloning of humans.” Generally, for short direct quotes, put the attribution at the end Generally, for short direct quotes, put the attribution at the end “That’s the dumbest thing I’ve ever heard,” she said.

20. 20 Generally, for long direct quotes, put attribution in the middle. Generally, for long direct quotes, put attribution in the middle. “That’s the dumbest thing I’ve ever heard,” she said. “I, for one, am going to ignore the rule.” To grab reader attention, start the paragraph with the quote, not the attribution. To grab reader attention, start the paragraph with the quote, not the attribution.

21. 21 Don’t quote two people in the same paragraph. Put them in separate paragraphs, and let the reader know you’re switching speakers. Don’t quote two people in the same paragraph. Put them in separate paragraphs, and let the reader know you’re switching speakers. Instead of: Instead of: “This disaster could have been avoided,” Wilcox said. “It was entirely the governor’s fault,” Ruiz said. Write: Write: “This disaster could have been avoided,” Wilcox said. Ruiz agreed. “It was entirely the governor’s fault.”

22. 22 Abbreviated Titles in Quotes Spell out all formal titles when used in quotations, with one exception: Dr. Spell out all formal titles when used in quotations, with one exception: Dr. “Governor Gilmore considers the bill a waste of money,” spokesman Mark Miner said. “Governor Gilmore considers the bill a waste of money,” spokesman Mark Miner said. Texas Gov. George W. Bush said, “I have asked General Colin Powell to be my running mate.” Mayor Tim Kaine said, “Dr. Chargois has given us all an example to follow.”

23. 23 Anonymous Sources Get permission from editor or news director before using anonymous sources Get permission from editor or news director before using anonymous sources Be prepared to tell the editor or news director who the anonymous source is Be prepared to tell the editor or news director who the anonymous source is All information from anonymous sources should be verified All information from anonymous sources should be verified Search for the motive Search for the motive Make sure source is in a position to have this credible information Make sure source is in a position to have this credible information

24. 24 Make sure your audience understands there is a clear an present danger in revealing your anonymous source Make sure your audience understands there is a clear an present danger in revealing your anonymous source Do not allow your anonymous source to engage in attacks on other individuals or groups Do not allow your anonymous source to engage in attacks on other individuals or groups If you must, then make sure all individuals and groups are contacted If you must, then make sure all individuals and groups are contacted IT IS ALWAYS BEST TO AVOID USING ANY ANONYMOUS SOURCE