1. (9A) Writing Describing a Person By Fan Haibin （范海彬） Dong Men Junior High School

2. B ut my s on likes playing basketball. I like playing the music. My Hobby I like ____________________ because ___________________________. But my_________________________. he thinks______________________________. He thinks it’s exciting. Listen, think and write Listen, think and write ---sentence to paragraph--- Listen, think and write ---sentence to paragraph--- It’s interesting. riding a bicycle it can keep me healthy deskmate likes reading it can enrich his knowledge

3. Read, choose and make a passage Tom didn't come to school yesterday. Tom didn't come to school yesterday. I like Mary. I like Mary. I I like Mary. She is helpful. She is helpful. S She is helpful. He is good at Maths. He is good at Maths. H He is good at Maths. He was ill. He was ill. She often helps me with my work. She often helps me with my work. S She often helps me with my work. She sings well. She sings well. S She sings well. I am going to see him after class. I am going to see him after class. Topic sentenceSupport sentence

4. Read, choose and make a passage Tom didn't come Tom didn't come to school yesterday. Tom didn't come Tom didn't come to school yesterday. I like Mary. I like Mary. She is helpful. She is helpful. He is good at Maths. He is good at Maths. He was ill. He was ill. She often helps me with my work. She often helps me with my work. She sings well. She sings well. I am going to see him after class. I am going to see him after class. Topic sentenceSupport sentence

5. Find the sentence in each paragraph that breaks unity I enjoy weekends. I can sleep late on Saturday mornings. My friends and I can go to the movies. I can do all kinds of shopping. School homework is School homework is due on Monday. We usually go for a ride on Saturday afternoon.

6. Find the sentence in each paragraph that breaks unity Charles is very interested in cars. He knows all the details about every new model. His parents parents give him $10 a week for gas. He spends a lot of time working on his old Ford. He attends all the car shows.

7.  Read the following sentences and then do Exercises A and B. a. Sue is clever. b. She is an excellent basketball player. c. She has won many swimming awards. d. The girls in my class are quite different from each other. e. Linda is an artist. f. Her teammates chose her to be captain of the basketball team. g. Carol is the best dancer in school. h. No one in school can catch up with her at the school sports meeting.

8. a. Sue is clever. b. She is an excellent basketball player. c. She has won many swimming awards. d. The girls in my class are quite different from each other. e. Linda is an artist. f. Her teammates chose her to be captain of the basketball team. g. Carol is the best dancer in school. h. No one in school can catch up with her at the school sports meeting. TS: Kathy is athletic. 1.2. 3.4. b f c h A (TS=Topic sentence) (SS=support sentences) SS:

9. a. Sue is clever. b. She is an excellent basketball player. c. She has won many swimming awards. d. The girls in my class are quite different from each other. e. Linda is an artist. f. Her teammates chose her to be captain of the basketball team. g. Carol is the best dancer in school. h. No one in school can catch up with her at the school sports meeting. B (TS=Topic sentence) (SS=support sentences) TS:_____ SS 1. _____ 2. Kathy is athletic. da 3. ______ 4. ______ 4. ______ eg

10.   12 34 Praising card （赞美卡） ———— ， You are my friend. I like you very much. You are my friend. I like you very much. ____________________________________ ____________________________________ ____________________________________ I’m proud of you. I’ll learn from you. Best regards, ________ ________

11. Brainstorm a person classmate cute clever nauty sister friends...... teacher parents friendly honest kind helpful.....

12. C I do my homework carefully every day. I always help teachers. I never tell lies I always share my snacks with my friends. I never tell lies I can play basketball well. I can work out difficult Maths exercises. I always get As in English. I always wear school uniforms I eat enough fruit and vegetables.

13. C be friendly and kind obey the school rules be hardworking be good at English 1.read different books after class 3.get up early and get to school early 2.take blind people cross the road 5.leave in the rubbish bins rubbish 8.never eat or drink in the library 4.usually study in library 9.speak English well 11.be able to read English newspapers 6.share biscuits with classmates 12.help decorate classroom before the party 7..never give up difficult Maths exercises 10.never play computer games on weekdays

14. C __________________________________ She never tells lies. Although she gets poor marks in English, she tells her parents about them. When she finds the money on the ground, she picks it up and gives it to her teacher. When I want to copy her homework, she asks me not to do so and to be honest. I like such an honest girl very much. Alice is honest. Although she gets poor marks in English, she tells her parents about them. When she finds the money on the ground, she picks it up and gives it to her teacher. When I want to copy her homework, she asks me not to do so and to be honest. She never tells lies. topic sentence ( 主题句 )

15. C _______________.she never tells lies. Although she gets poor marks in English, she tells her parents about them. When she finds the money on the ground, she picks it up and gives it to her teacher. When I want to copy her homework, she asks me not to do so and to be honest. I like the honest girl very much. topic sentence 主题句 Example 1 Example 2 Example 3 Example 4 Alice is honest

16.   12 34 Praising card （赞美卡） Chen Jiayao ， You’re my friend. I like you very much. You’re my friend. I like you very much. You are a warm-hearted girl. You raise the national flag for our school every day although sometimes it is too hot outside. You put the poster onto the wall when it falls down. You not only help to tidy up our classroom when you’re free but also help with our study when we have diffiluty. You really give us a big hand in our life and study. I’m proud of you. I’ll learn from you. Best regards, Tina

17. 学生评估自己写作的标准 读起来很有趣。 有主题句。 文章满 60 字。文章中没有包含无关 的 材料。 文章首尾句有呼应。 文章句式有变化。 文章语法、拼写、标点无错。

18. C Correction codes Examples ∧ （缺漏） We ∧ all students. T （时态错误） T （时态错误） He eat ice cream. Sp ( 拼写错误 ) I am a gril. ( 删除多余的词 ) I like apples, and oranges and pears. I like apples, and oranges and pears. ? （用词不当或难以理解） Being a policeman is very bitter. P （标点符号错误） P （标点符号错误） I like apples, and oranges. I like apples, and oranges. WO （词序错误） WO （词序错误） I like chocolate because is it sweet I like chocolate because is it sweet C ( 大小写错误 ) C ( 大小写错误 ) I like it Because it’s nice. I like it Because it’s nice. √ ( 好词好句 ) √That’s what I’ll be. Revise

19. C Homework: 1.Polish （修改） your partner’s writing. 2.Make a praising card and send it to your parents or your teacher.