1. Day 1 Baseball may be an older sport than any American game.
The colonists similar games called cricket and rounders from great britain.
Elimination of an illogical comparison
Correct capitalization of name of place
Correction of a sentence fragment

2. Day 1 Baseball may be an older sport than any other American game.
Elimination of an illogical comparison
The colonists imported similar games called cricket and rounders from Great Britain.
Correction of a sentence fragment
Correct capitalization of name of place

3. Day 2 Use of commas to set off direct address
“Did you know Darren that baseball was first played on a square field with stakes instead of bases,” asked the coach?
“Stakes injured the players. This happened on a frequent basis. As a result,
sand-filled sacks were substituted for the stakes,” he explained.
Use of commas to set off direct address
Use of adverb to combine sentences
Correct placement of question mark with quotation marks

4. Day 2 _________________________
“Did you know, Darren, that baseball was first played on a square field with stakes instead of bases?” asked the coach.
Use of commas to set off direct address
Correct placement of question mark with quotation marks
This happened on a frequent basis.
“Frequently, stakes injured the players. As a result, sand-filled sacks were substituted for the stakes,” he explained.
Use of adverb to combine sentences
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5. Day 3
Modern baseball started at the knicker-bocker baseball club in But the origin
of the rules have been the subject of considerable controversy.
The first game was played on June 19, 1846, in Hoboken, New Jersey. It was the initial game ever played.
Subject and verb agreement
Elimination of empty sentence
Elimination of but at the beginning of a sentences
Capitalization of name of organization

6. Day 3
Modern baseball started at the Knicker-bocker Baseball Club in 1845, but the origin of the rules has been the subject of considerable controversy.
Capitalization of name of organization
Elimination of but at the beginning of a sentences
Subject and verb agreement
It was the initial game ever played.
The first game was played on June 19, 1846, in Hoboken, New Jersey.
Elimination of empty sentence
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7. Day 4 Elimination of unnecessary preposition
The economics of baseball have changed today, making it more harder to attract fans to some stadiums.
Nonetheless when their teams are winning, fans stream inside of the ballparks.
Elimination of unnecessary preposition
Subject and verb agreement
Use of comma after introductory word
Elimination of double comparison

8. Day 4
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more
The economics of baseball has changed today, making it harder to attract fans to some stadiums.
Subject and verb agreement
Elimination of double comparison of
Nonetheless, when their teams are winning, fans stream inside the ballparks.
Use of comma after introductory word
Elimination of unnecessary preposition
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9. Day 5
The baseball diamond the infield measures 90 feet on each side.
Each team has 9 fielders the catcher, the pitcher, 3 basemen, a shortstop, and 3 outfielders.
Spelling out numbers through one hundred
Spelling out numbers through one hundred
Use of colon to introduce a list
Use of dashes with explanatory information

10. Day 5
The baseball diamond--the infield--measures ninety feet on each side.
Use of dashes with explanatory information
Spelling out numbers through one hundred
Each team has nine fielders: the catcher, the pitcher, three basemen, a shortstop, and three outfielders.
Use of colon to introduce a list