1. Year 10 Feature Articles… The Good… The Bad… The Ugly… The Good… The Bad… The Ugly…

2. The Good… And You fulfilled the requirements of the task if you: » Wrote a clever and catchy title » Structured the article accurately » Composed accurate paragraphs » Ended with a clever or “questioning” concluding statement… And You fulfilled the requirements of the task if you: » Wrote a clever and catchy title » Structured the article accurately » Composed accurate paragraphs » Ended with a clever or “questioning” concluding statement…

3. The Good » Included :  Personal anecdotes from relevant people  Quotes  Specific and relevant examples and evidence to back-up your statements  clever phrases used by the writer? The fact you know you can believe what they have told you? The fact they make you laugh? » Included :  Personal anecdotes from relevant people  Quotes  Specific and relevant examples and evidence to back-up your statements  clever phrases used by the writer? The fact you know you can believe what they have told you? The fact they make you laugh?

4. The Good »Identified AND explained the effect of a variety of film techniques which are “typical” to your director’s work »Embedded in your explanations of the films’ style and theme, specific AND relevant details of the director’s personal and social experience »Identified AND explained the effect of a variety of film techniques which are “typical” to your director’s work »Embedded in your explanations of the films’ style and theme, specific AND relevant details of the director’s personal and social experience

5. The Bad… ;-( » just telling the reader about the director’s CV. »Some articles were simply a written version of the director’s career time- line » just telling the reader about the director’s CV. »Some articles were simply a written version of the director’s career time- line

6. The Bad… »You did -  Did not write a title or by line  Did not include any personal anecdotes or interesting quotes  Not structure your paragraphs in a logical and fluent manner  Did not complete the article »You did -  Did not write a title or by line  Did not include any personal anecdotes or interesting quotes  Not structure your paragraphs in a logical and fluent manner  Did not complete the article

7. The Bad »You did:  Simply “described” the films’ plot line  Only referred to the “themes” of the director in a superficial way - with no development or reference to director’s personal experience  Not mentioned any film techniques or stylistic devices »You did:  Simply “described” the films’ plot line  Only referred to the “themes” of the director in a superficial way - with no development or reference to director’s personal experience  Not mentioned any film techniques or stylistic devices

8. A profile needs to give more of an idea of the individual you are interviewing-- » concentrate on their personality and what is interesting about them, rather than running chronologically through their CV.

9. » The profile should contain lots of quotes from the person, as well as some of your own personal observations.

10. Even though the subject matter may (on the face of it be quite dull) you have to try to make it interesting. » It is important to remember that these are not opinion pieces. » you should always remain impartial, fair, and accurate. » Get quotes from others--preferably experts in the field--that back up the arguments you are trying to make. » It is important to remember that these are not opinion pieces. » you should always remain impartial, fair, and accurate. » Get quotes from others--preferably experts in the field--that back up the arguments you are trying to make.

11. Doing your research » You may well be asked to write on something you have only the haziest notion about. » If so, a Google search is usually a good place to start. And even if you do think you know about it, you should do plenty of “wide” research. » You may well be asked to write on something you have only the haziest notion about. » If so, a Google search is usually a good place to start. And even if you do think you know about it, you should do plenty of “wide” research.

12. Getting direct quotes is essential for a good feature. » To find an expert, try a search on Google. » If that does not work go to bmj.com and put the subject you are researching in the search engine. You will soon find a list of recent articles. » To find an expert, try a search on Google. » If that does not work go to bmj.com and put the subject you are researching in the search engine. You will soon find a list of recent articles.

13. The introduction » An anecdote, or » an interesting observation, » or even a clever play on words will often make a good introduction. » An anecdote, or » an interesting observation, » or even a clever play on words will often make a good introduction.

14. » Sometimes a direct quote will do the trick. » Try to avoid the plodding "once upon a time" style. » Sometimes a direct quote will do the trick. » Try to avoid the plodding "once upon a time" style.

15. » It is worth spending time on your introductory paragraph. » Play around with ideas and images until you hit on one that works. » But do not wait for the perfect intro before you start writing. » Sometimes you just need to get it down on paper, then hone the introduction later. » It is worth spending time on your introductory paragraph. » Play around with ideas and images until you hit on one that works. » But do not wait for the perfect intro before you start writing. » Sometimes you just need to get it down on paper, then hone the introduction later.

16. Be Creative!! » Unlike news stories, where there is a standard formula to follow, features can, and should, be more creative if they are to keep the reader's attention.

17. Great links for clever journalists!!! Who research and write great feature articles! »http://www.bbc.co.uk/films/2005/05/04/ridley_scott_kingdom_of_heaven _interview.shtml for actual transcripts of interviews with film directors.http://www.bbc.co.uk/films/2005/05/04/ridley_scott_kingdom_of_heaven _interview.shtml »http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=I4K22AxVxxw for video of interview with film directorhttp://www.youtube.com/watch?v=I4K22AxVxxw »http://www.bbc.co.uk/films/2005/05/04/ridley_scott_kingdom_of_heaven _interview.shtml for actual transcripts of interviews with film directors.http://www.bbc.co.uk/films/2005/05/04/ridley_scott_kingdom_of_heaven _interview.shtml »http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=I4K22AxVxxw for video of interview with film directorhttp://www.youtube.com/watch?v=I4K22AxVxxw